if u want you can contact me in discord - bibasxettri 馃檭
ch 0 9 Chapter -09: The Broder War Starts
Fantasy 路 GodXLuxifer
IF U SEE NEXUS INSTEAD OF PENDRAGON IN ANY CHAPTER THEN SORRY I REWROTE THE WHOLE STORY BUT I FORGOT TO CHANGE THE WORD IN SOME PLACES
ch 17 Chapter -17: Chaos in Rhine Region
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do same to mine
Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.
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Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.
Fantasy 路 GodXLuxifer
It dosesn't matter who does it first tell me what to write?
Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.
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Sure 馃憤
Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.
Fantasy 路 GodXLuxifer
First chapter is nice, hope you don't drop it and u should make the chapter a bit long.(Please upload frequently 馃榾馃榾).
ch 0 1 Start of everything.....
Urban 路 Goo_00
Is he op from the start or gets op faster??
War Horse is a Magical beast known for it's speed.
The county town of Rhine is located in the heart of the Rhine region. It is about a Thousand Kilometers away from the Nexus Territory. Riding a war horse for many days in a row. Rennes and others finally arrived at their destination smoothly.
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He will surely I am thinking of giving him a profession where he can be Both Mage and Knight馃憤馃憤
[A/N: MC WILL USE LIGHT ATTRIBUTES SKILLS AND IN LATER CHAPTER HE WILL BECOME GOD OF LIGHT(maybe) I DON'T WANT TO USE SOME CLICH OR OVERUSED ATTRIBUTES LIKE TIME & SPACE, CHAOS, DESTRUCTION, SWORD ETC.]
Fantasy 路 GodXLuxifer
No he will Not create a kingdom for now but After kingdom there are 5 Great Empire in the Dying Isle Island and there are Orc Empire, Elf Empire and many more Powerful force So you can guess about it but The kingdom of Lance will not be destroyed in the War But it will be destroyed due in another arc馃槈
ch 19 Chapter -19: Viscount Family Perished.
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It's only building the wall as it will be more and more troublesome about writing building more wall in the future so i am writing the length of the wall of the later chapters after his town became more City or Capital馃憤
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I don't know how to write lemons but i may try it in later chapter馃槈
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Well he will get more advance one in the future馃槜
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It's in the later chapter..
ch 0 1 Chapter- 01: Return Home And Inheriting The Family
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In cultivation novel where a person who cultivate immortality are called cultivator so i am asking what should i call those who are Warrior or Mage
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I am planning to do the same with low talent as he will get stronger his nobel title will be upgraded and he will develop more business and cities which his children will manage
ch 12 Chapter -12: Marrying A Mage.
Fantasy 路 GodXLuxifer
You are using way to much future tense in the story where you should use present tenseshe 'would' come with tea and biscuits (it's sound *ucking stupid like you are seeing the future) why not write she entered the room while holding the tray of tea
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Learning about sects
Primordial Monarch System
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