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The first few chapters were pretty intense but wow...this is a really good novel. I mean I felt the loss and the grief so vividly, and I am actively rooting for Sawyer's happiness. The writing quality is high up. Would highly recommend. Well done.

You're welcome. I'll read on.

I was a little confused when I started but I eased into it after the first few chapters. It definitely has a unique storyline, quite different from what I'm used to. But it's simple and straightforward. I also liked the author notes at the end of each chapter, telling us about the beasts and what they do. I did notice a few grammatical errors but aside that, it was pretty great. Well done.

Oh, sure. I'll do that. Thanks.

Hahaha...definitely. I'll upload everyday without fail.

It's a good start to a great story. Good work Author. There are a few grammatical errors but those can easily be corrected. I also think some of the paragraphs are too long but this can also be easily rectified.

This story is pretty great and it picks up fast. Read the first few chapters and I'm already hooked. I'll be back for more. Good work Author.

Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm really sorry about the spacing issue but every paragraph is separated by a space. I'm not sure why you're experiencing this problem. Also, we do get a lot more of Italy in the subsequent chapters. You should stay and read ahead. Thanks again!

So far the story is pretty straightforward. The writing quality is quite okay. I read the first few chapters and I think I'll read more to see where it goes.

Thanks!

Thank you so much!!!