MY SACRED HEART

LV 4

Muche_Godwin

I love the story intro. The characters are unique and I also like the author's writing style. I highly recommend this novel. Keep up the good work author, I'm rooting for you 😊

LV 4

obiparadise_purity

Reading the first chapter of this book reminds me of a movie I watched not quite long ago. "The princess". I can see this novel is going to be an interesting one but you have to improve as you update. I like the novel, thumbs up.

LV 1

AKHIL_GOYAL

Nice plot by the author. Keep up the good work. The story has an interesting flow and I like to read a lot of it in your future update, so keep going.

LV 1

aleksandra_pano10

I can't say much about the story since you have posted just one chapter but I loved the MC description. It kinda gives me the vibes of "Rebel" and I like it. Hope you'll most more chapters soon

LV 1

Gheata_Darian

Nice idea you got there which got me hooked instantly! A bit too many mistakes for my like and the story feels a bit rush. Please include more description, your story barely started. Leaving that to the side, the idea is great with HUGE POTENTIAL. Please update it asap and revise the chapter before posting it.

LV 11

PERWEEN

Great story I'd say simply. Character interaction, the chemistry, the mystery and development of the plot is really well written. Recommended to everyone who may be interested. Kudos to author.

LV 13

Sweet_Vanilla553

The story was so good. But sometime I got confused from some phrases. I don't knw whether it's my fault or another reason. But I think I saw some grammer and another mistakes.But I really enjoyed your work even though I still only read 2chaps.Hope the author will keep going and give her best for it. You can do it...👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 2

maylily_jk

I liked the story. The characters too seem quite intriguing. I can see that the story is going to be a promising one. There are few grammatical mistakes here and there but nothing too serious. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

LV 1

Ginger_toon

It's a good start to a great story. Good work Author. There are a few grammatical errors but those can easily be corrected. I also think some of the paragraphs are too long but this can also be easily rectified.

LV 4

Drei05

Avoid creating long paragraphs as reader might get confused or bored reading them. The story might be great but it needs to organized too. But chapters can be edited so don't be hard on yourself and improve steadily, good luck!

LV 1

Brian_Hanes_117

The writing needs some work in the form of capitalization and some other basic grammar adjustments. The story seems interesting form the start. The characters could use more description of how they look, how they dress, what they think, etc. The story itself, the setting, and the background could use more description. But the writer is off to an early start, a lot can be updated, changed, and improved so I look forward to seeing your journey as a writer.

LV 1

Isabelle_Kenny

Thanks for the reviews I will surely do better in the next chapter and going to update soon thanks I really appreciate 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

LV 3

James15martin

an interesting start to a novel with an interesting premice the writing style is good but there is a few grammatical errors that should be fixed