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VegetaIsBadass
LV 4A New Born Writer
2022-08-13 Joined South AfricaBadges 4
Moments 35
It seems like I did not deliver a good story for you. I hope you find a good story. Thank you for stopping by.
A new story here. I cannot stand writing long stories so this will be another short one. Checkout my other one shot and vote for me. Thank you.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Such good readers I have. Thank you. That was an awful mistake I made, hope that doesn't stop you from continuing .
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Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
The term 'Alpha' refers to the beginning, the first step anything amongst those lines. What I mean is, the Alpha System is the beginning of all. That's the most I can tell you for now, without spoilers.
"Hiroshi Hajiro, you have been chosen by the *Alpha System*," the voice intoned, its words resonating with an otherworldly authority that sent a chill down Hiroshi's spine. The mention of the Alpha System sent a jolt of apprehension coursing through him, its significance shrouded in mystery and uncertainty.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Why comment that?
"Hiroshi Hajiro, you have been chosen by the *Alpha System*," the voice intoned, its words resonating with an otherworldly authority that sent a chill down Hiroshi's spine. The mention of the Alpha System sent a jolt of apprehension coursing through him, its significance shrouded in mystery and uncertainty.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Council. Typo there.
ch 34 Chapter 33 (Volume 2: Arc 2)
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
No problemõ
ch 36 Chapter 35
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Know what. I'm going to do just that.
Sorry if I'm coming off a bit strong today, it's just frustrating dealing with these kinds of comments all the time. Hope I'm not bugging you too much with my venting.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Here is Sanemi Shikabane
Longest comment I got so thank you. But if you had continued the story, you would understand why he did it. So I'll tell you, I won't delete your comment. It kinda gave me a different point of view. Try it I'm sure you'll enjoy, he doesn't even use the system for too long.[img=Sigh]
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
And the human form of my cute tsundere.
The forth one is the prideful and tsundere, Lucifero.
And the angel-human form of Aurora.
And the human form of Raiden.
Perhaps he could if he had the power.
ch 46 Chapter 45
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass