I'm a lazy, wannabe author. Sorry but it's the unfortunate truth 馃様
Thanks for clearing this up, keep up the good work your novel is something else man
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Usually i steer clear of R-18 works, they get too focused on sex rather than story, but this one is too good to ignore. Author has some interesting fantasies to say the least tho 馃
Starts off alright, nothing special, but don't be deceived, the author is an artist. It might just be me but the way the author thoroughly details plans and gives more time to side characters makes this novel so much better. Around chapter 30 Is when it starts to get good. The MC is op, but the novel is written so well that you often forget about it, which makes it that much more satisfying when he demonstrates his power. The MC has a simple goal but the plot captures his path to achieving this goal spectacularly. You'd think you get bored when the MC isn't met with much contest by other characters in terms of raw power, but that isn't the case at all. MC uses smart tactics, sometimes unrealistic, but smart nonetheless and that's something I like seeing in a character. Only thing is, this novel has been on hiatus a few times where the schedule was broken, but author also gives bonus chapters if rankings are good so it's not that big a deal. Apart from that i feel some of the characters at time act weird or inappropriate. E.g. Superman after nearly dying twice at Arias' hand and getting all his limbs torn off, eyes gouged out and backshots from a helicopter blade somehow is fine after some rest. I understand the physical regen and technology that made him make a full physical recovery, but mentally there are no scars at all, he just gets a bit more wary of Arias and that's it, I know he's stronger mentally than humans are but perhaps a bit too strong? Aside from that some of the characters don't feel entirely accurate, Diana is a bit too foolish for someone 5000 years old. Batman is a bit of a joke in this novel too, and that disappoints me but at the same time I know that most of it stems from my own biased opinion because at the end of the day he's still a human. There are also some grammatical issues, but after reading unhealthy amounts of Eastern cultuivation, I hardly notice them. Despite it's flaws this is still probably the best fanfic I've read so far though, I look forward to more of you works. btw you get all my power stones so don't drop pls.
No problem, stay tuned!
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No problem, you are officially my first comment! stick around for the story and feel free to be open on any tips you might have for me, it's my first time writing a novel.
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Thanks for clearing this up, keep up the good work your novel is something else man
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