Webnovel Author: Yumera - Novel Collection

Ah you’re right, I’v been keeping school work ahead so I can make time for the story, I’l continue it soon. ;)

Lovely story, I think it has an element to become a great story but only thing that was slightly off was the separation between each paragraph and sentences.

The story is great but dialogue seems a little bland, over the story plot seems consistent unlike other novels I've seen so far. Characters seems to have memorable names.

Thank you I will try to revise some of the grammar soon.

I love your world design amazing, story is told in a detailed and immersive manner including your novel cover. First piece that I found intriguing.

Love the idea, I think some character are hard to identify after reading 3 chapters in It was a little confusing. But over all the characters was explained and express good personalities and show really great writing.

Just another shameless author rating their own story, I think this story could be build up more hopefully you guys think the same. I'm just trying to improve on my writing, As a summer project I think ill manage to keep this up.