Need to work on your translation and grammer more
ch 0 8 Chapter 8
Anime & Comics · Marioni
Too much of a info dumb on each chapter
ch 17 I Understand Why People Hated Rome Chp 16
Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
Fuck me stop with the “she” so fucking much
After some time, "She" vanished from inside the Hidden Dungeon through the same, torn fabric of space, where "She" earlier came from, leaving the passed-out Russell on the ground.
Fantasy · False_Architect
26 chapters and it’s ’ still so boring
ch 26 She Got Too Excited
Fantasy · Resurgent
Need to go through your work and edit it
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Fantasy · Champsing
This is shit, thought it would get better
ch 27 [Event] [Hectic First School Day] Prologue
Fantasy · NihilRuler
Took far to long just to get to this point
ch 26 The Day Before The Academy
Fantasy · NihilRuler
Get his bloody name right Jesus Christ
"Well, it has been decided, Perry Johnson shall go on a quest, hopefully he will survive." Mr D said opening another Diet Coke.
Book&Literature · Moonhorse
Can you just stop this stuff alt ogether
A/N: Maybe not, Hufflepuffs will take him in, surely.
Book&Literature · DreamyApe
Tbh this story got boring
ch 62 Chapter 59
Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
You drone on to much about unecessary stuff
ch 45 Crime and punishment
Anime & Comics · akikan40
Kinda boring dropping ut
ch 0 6 Friends and Feelings
Book&Literature · Drinnor
Think I prefer third person view
ch 0 5 4. Self-Defense.
Anime & Comics · Supes
This has been one of the best novels I’ve read in a long time
ch 40 Shut your mouth.
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
Signed up to your Patreon and your writing is even worse waste of money tbf
ch 0 1 FANFIC INFO + Plot
Naruto: Beast System
Anime & Comics · DarkGamerZ