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A boy born into a famous family and having the powers of an Angel. With these powers, he will try to make a difference. The experiences in his life made several paths open up before him, each with different outcomes. Each path could lead to several outcomes, though what path he takes is something that you will have to wait and see. Hope you enjoy this journey in MHA.
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You sick b#st@rd, for 23 boring chapters you got us attached to his family thinking this is a slice of life and then @#$##%* a full 180 degree. you should've done this in the earlier chapters you sick f@#$
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Honestly this was a great story, developed well, unique MC, and awesome powers. grammar was decent as well. the story takes a turn when the author decides to go with the hands down most cliche move you can make. Killing off the family. it wasn't written well, The MC suddenly became useless, and it was seen from a mile away. It's truly sad the author had to resort to this instead of finding something else to create the emotional impact needed. Killing off his friends for example. but no. had to go with the WN's favorite go to tragedy. Not that the story is bad after, its just, a story written so well ends up making this move is heart breaking and leaves a stain that can't be removed going forward. Hopefully the rest of the story turns out for the better, id still give it a chance if I were someone looking to give this a read but if you're looking for something special then this just isn't it.
this just might be the best MHA fanfic I've ever read and the only thing that could make this better is if there was no romance
I read through chapter 19, and I plan on continuing. I highly enjoy this story. You don't see many MHA fanfics that start way before UA high. But I think this type of story is considered niche due to the pacing and nonviolence involved in the beginning chapters. I like the idea of an archangel/seraphim quirk. It's unique and different. The author does a fantastic job of creating an image of the setting. The overall story is generally wholesome. A major issue I saw, and continue to see in many novels, are expressions and body movement. "Rolling my eyes, nodding in agreement, chuckling," etc. This novel, in particular, uses these about 5-8 times per chapter. It's too repetitive, and it's considered a bad writing habit. There are so many other ways to convey the feelings of your characters. I also don't particularly like any of the characters. I didn't see much individuality, but more like copy-and-paste personalities. Their uniqueness comes from their quirks, and that's it. Maybe it's better later on, and I will find out. Overall, I'd give this a 3.8/5.
overall the story seemed good but the characters didn't feel real, the whole family died but I didn't feel a thing, it was like it was necessary for the MC to become a emo and chase power unconditionally.Even if it was a tragedy I didn't feel sad for the MC and killing the whole family seemed unnecessary
what type of angel like one from dxd or from the bible or like from soem other anime
You hyped up him having all might bring his uncle and having such a big loving family and friends. Just so the next part for him to have everything taken from him, prentants and unborn little brother from him and lost his hard. So now he doesn’t have emotions. Horrible story trying to get a power boost from him because of trauma. He’ so young at that and all everyone can say I sorry for your loss and he’s gonna go on this “ kill all villains spree “ disappointed. Won’t be ready again
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Best MHA fan-fic i ever read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
5 star, all the wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Firstly, The story is written really well and I notice little to no grammar mistakes. Updates come regularly usually everyday or other day so pretty frequent. Now this MC isn’t like other MCs in MHA fanfics mainly because he doesn’t know the plot nor is he reincarnated. A lot of people say his family getting killed was to make him emo or he was nerfed when it happen clearly didn’t read the story. Story develops well and everything is done in a way that make sense as long as you actually read it through instead of letting your biased decision make the review for you. It’s simple this story isn’t for some people. Imo the character was done really well I don’t know why people wasn’t expecting a kid to actually be a kid. Again it’s not like he’s reincarnated or knows the plot and tragedy is in a lot of fics just stop reading if you don’t like it no point in leaving a bad review over a biased mindset. World background is well done and we see a angle of MHA that we don’t normally see in MHA fanfics. A lot of negative reviews are seriously biased imo. I’m not saying it’s the best but imo it’s really good and deserves way more recognition. P.S All Might fanboys can EAD
I don't know what these guys are on about below this review. Personally I think it was really good. Good character building as he didn't kill off the family straight off the bat, actually got you invested into it. The type of hero he becomes as well is intriguing as I haven't read it before as well as the time it's set in. He isn't born for the time of the canon. The only negatives are the whole bringing religion into reality shenanigans at the end, but meh. 4.2/5 Overall
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[SPOILERS BELOW] It was a 11/10 until it wasn’t. Then the story ended with what’d I’d probably say is a 6/10 at best. The story starts alright, has a forced edgy moment for growth that’s practically required in most stories now. Then it became so much more, the mc showed growth, had a relationship, started a family, and those around him showed growth as well as the story developed. Then it randomly become a DC Lucifer fic and everything became about demons, religion, and the literal most random ending I’ve ever seen to any story. For anyone who hasn’t started the fic yet, my personal recommendation is to STOP READING when they find out Mirko is pregnant. Let it end like that even if it’s not the most satisfying ending with proper closure, it’s still so much better than the actual ending. I can’t for any possible reason understand wth that ending was when the mc’s personality suddenly shifted like 3 times within 5 chapters, had friends and allies die or get crippled completely randomly, and why the mc got the sharpest nerf I’ve ever seen. Bro flew to the sun in seconds then is somehow too slow to go down to a basement when all his foes are already defeated. Sorry author if this was a bit harsh. I genuinely think the story was an 11/10 but that ending was literally so bad that it hurts. Just wish I could’ve saved myself and left the story as a 11 in my memories, hope this review helps out any future readers. p.s. Please understand this is my personal opinion and others may have differing opinions.
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thsi was a very enjoyable read , had very minor typos or grammatical mistakes , the plot and the story was good though the fight sences could have been made metter , the roamce was fine and the length was good .very good for a mha fanfic and one of the few finished ones.
An amazing story with good character development, romance, action and a worthwhile read.
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