Webnovel Author: lordgsh - Novel Collection

sure, my discord id is lordgsh

I guess i should start developing that arc before continuing the renaissance but since presently I wanted to add another action first before exploring the invention and renaissance. Would need to prepare the empire for that before entering the new age.

i guess so, probably with consumption also...

Indeed, since it was an earlier chapters, I had to have at least some assistance to help me find ideas. These repetitions were the result of it. Earlier on, I have abundance of ideas but as time goes on, it becomes much harder as I have to focus on the plot. while i did use ai, it was more to proofread my narrative rather than to use it to generate ideas, the ideas itself were purely mine, the wording however is not, i sometimes lost myself in my writing that I have forgotten some phrases or words that fits... It was inevitable since English is not my first language anyway...the idea is still there, but the delivery, doesn't quite sit... Although I used ai, it is not as if i took it word by word, i also had to rewrite and add it myself if i find the delivery doesn't fit what i had in mind... and since some of my chapters might sound offensive, using ai is not practical so i have to take time to better my delivery in the case ai cannot work as my editor. However, sometimes, i also took time to edit earlier chapters so that it doesn't seem as though as if it was ideas made from ai and not mine. I use ai purely for grammar checking and fix the phrase i forgot.

I imagined it to be like this at the moment

well, not exactly got one... not permanent anyway.

anyway i can atm...cannot be too choosy with it nowadays...😅

a job...

well, the goal is not to have any form of forced relationship/simping... though there would be some accidental one made, i want to steer away from doing it... However, I do want to try to romanticize his historical relationship a bit more fictionally, because realistically, I don't know how he and his wives relationship were... But that doesn't mean I will include harem... since I believed that the Byzantine Empire marriage law at the time were quite rigid and monogamy...as for his emotion, im experimenting...though i did made it so that he'd be more attached to his comrades, but im not making him naive... since he know at the time, court intrigue were quite common and that backstabbing existed, i do not necessarily make him trust others easily... in terms of character emotion, for now, more controlled since i don't know better way to describe emotion, still trying to improve, you see...i envisioned my mc to be more straightforward, not playing around the bushes, specific and goal-oriented, not easily swayed...

thx 4 the support, i do want to hear your thoughts so far, as i had to constantly revise the chapters to improve consistency, i began to frequently went on hiatus these days to study authors of similar genre...

Do comment on my new writing style... It has been some time now, I know some of you waited for a long time after my break(which I don't immediately return), but trust me, I have been trying on searching for better writing style, researching various aspect of the period, and ofc, reading a lot of books... In the process, I'm experimenting on what style I should adopt, dialogue narrative or descriptive narrative(which I have been doing for the previous volumes)... However, with this new style, I have to cut down a lot of words which would then extending the chapters even longer... It might take a few chapters to resolve one element of the story, but I hope it achieved satisfying ending...for now, I try for a safer method first to experiment with the style... Hope you can give me some feedbacks and sorry for my 'ghosting' from the writing...

that is a huge blunder...thx for pointing out, back to edit😅

as you can see, 1-2 weeks...