Author is not using the word akin enough
Good shi. ________________________________
Why so expensive? he basically spent around 600,000 poke dollars for three TMs. As he said it’s more than ordinary people can earn in a decade. So basically ordinary people can’t afford TMs
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He shouldn’t get hurt as he has invincible body.
"Get up, now," Hecate kicked his shin making Percy wince in pain. "I'll be upstairs, come quickly or the next kick will be between your legs."
A Demigod In The World Of Magic
Book&Literature · SageOF016
Honestly for me personally Enid was much better for MC, the contrast between the characters personalities made it more interesting relationship to read. I find MCxWednesday bland and boring.
bro, I have been reading fanfictions since last six years that's why I have built up a standard. These dialogues are cringy to me because I have read so many similarly cheesy dialogues.
They maintain eye contact for a while and just smiled at each other. While still looking at each other Peter breaks the silence "We're going to be great friends aren't we"
Spider-Man Mayhem
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
The dialogues are cringe af. I physically shuddered reading this.
They maintain eye contact for a while and just smiled at each other. While still looking at each other Peter breaks the silence "We're going to be great friends aren't we"
Spider-Man Mayhem
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
Why was mc struggling so much against selmy. He should have used his superhuman strength and speed more efficiently rather than engaging in swordplay in which he is clearly at a disadvantage in terms of skill. Honestly he should have backhanded the sword and punched selmy as soon as his iceblade was countered.
I find it hard to believe that the guard isn't a slightest bit suspicious that a man knows who the night watch is but claims to forget his own name.It's not very well thought out author.
The rider stared at him for a moment, his expression a blend of suspicion and curiosity. He sighed, his grip on the sword's hilt loosening slightly. "Strangely enough... I don't detect lies in your words," he admitted, though his blade remained aimed at the young man.
Winter's (GOT) Nothing on Me
TV · Wicked132
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original HP: Life in Hogwarts ( SI OC)
4.74
You know the drill, a college student woke up as 11 year old Callum Haven, he founds out he is in Harry Potter universe. Read as he traverse through magical society as a muggleborn orphan. This fanfic will be a realistic approach based on the seven books and not on other fanfics and fan theories. MC won't just get lucky and have special encounters like some other fics. For example, realistically there is no chance for an orphan to get a special core for wand other than the three that Ollivander sells, so don't expect MC to get a Nundu whisker core or any other special encounter like that. If that is not your cup of tea, you can still try to read it for some chapters and then decide to drop it if you don't like. MC will become friends with Golden trio but he won't be a part of it. And helping them in events doesn't mean that he is part of their group. Pairings have not been decided yet. Romance will happen after fifth year at least and it will take a long time for that. It's not a priority right now. This is my first Fanfic, after reading uncountable number of them. I would appreciate some constructive criticism as english is not my first language, so language in the story will be simple for London in 90's. This story will be available on fanfiction. NET I don't own Harry Potter universe, everything except the main character belongs to JK Rowling.20 Chs 2.7k Collections
Really interesting so far, different from usual slop. Writing quality is also good.
Harry Potter: The Beauxbatons Champion
Book&Literature · Unserious_Scribe