Webnovel Author: UpSide - Novel Collection

Her parents really aren’t the “close, very caring, and understanding” kind of parents. If anyone else saw from a 3rd person perspective all that happened from when Grace got her mom’s attention to when Grace’s mom got into her car, they’d have to be blind to see how deeply Grace is feeling the hurt of not having her parents be there for her and how her mom is completely not caring enough. It’s a form of neglecting important things that aren’t obvious in appearance unless one is observant and is decently versed in “understanding via one’s own analysis”. Grace’s way of dealing with her despair is all messed up and things need to change in order for her not to cause her survival’s demise, despite her reasoning being that it is due to others, she has the ultimate hand at deciding her own survival when it comes to the particular way that she is dealing with her despair. I’m still hoping that at least a few good times with others end up happening for her before what ended up becoming of her happens as mentioned in Chapter 1.

She has a luxury lifestyle but not the social company, interactions, and expressed love from her family. She is liked and has people who want to be her friend but, from the way she describes, their behavior and kindness are not genuine. She is in despair but she keeps that inside while her outward appearance looks like everything is stable and normal enough. I feel she’s a little overly focussing on the negative aspects of what her life is like. Judging from the first chapter, she either hung out and did things with the wrong kind of “friends”, which is like escapism, or her despair got the best of her and lead to her being self-destructive, or both. This chapter is showing how her life is luxurious but she is tragically not “handling well” the negatives that are part of her entire and even everyday life. I hope there’s something good she looks forward to doing and likes to do at least like once a week or so. I hope there are at least some good things ahead in the next chapters. As far as this Chapter, message received.

That’s a heart-wrenching scenario. Had me absorbed and feeling pity for those affected by what happened. Grace seemed to have had her secrets that she was living while she also lived a desireable life. The desireable part of her life is maybe only all that everyone else knew she was living. I’m still not definitely sure if her death is actually a suicide but it sure looks like it is. This intro sets the story up to have plenty of options and mystery as to how the story can unfold. I’m gonna read more because I need answers. Your intro Chapter caught my interest.

John treated that girl kinda coldly. He could’ve handled that way better. I wonder if that means he’s got a ”not so great” side to his character. This project is John’s chance to try making a good impression to Shelly. It’s not looking likely that Shelly will change her mind about him. Something’s gotta eventually work the miracle that would make Shelly see John in a good light.

Looks like John’s making a rise. Could change Shelly’s impression of him for the better, possibly much better.

Normalcy...and now talk of drugs. Probably bad news. Should be interesting.

Albino baby tortoise being an attention wh*re

Great chapter! I knew he messed up by checking out more of the customer’s property. They weren’t as heartless as I thought they were gonna be. Since he’s the MC, I expected him to survive but I didn’t expect things to be playing out this way. Suspenseful. What’s next?

An albino MC, that’s new for me. Cool so far. Sometimes story intros seem all good-natured and normal but then the Author hits you with surprise chaos and action. I’m curious to see how this story goes.

I like the entertaining verbal back and forths. Getting to know their personalities. Seems playful but are they in an environment of seriousness? A place like that and their being armed, plus talks of missions pretty much sounds like the story is promising some good action is coming up. I’m looking forward to finding out what’s the case as to what this story turns into. This chapter builds up a lot of potential. Nicely done.