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Moments 43
Bro...... Please forgive my wording, English is not my strong point so this book may have multiple grammatical errors......
"This is the Dragon Element Pill, if you eat it, you will be able to break through to the Soul Transformation Realm, which is enough to keep you alive for another life.
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Qin Tian grabbed his mother's hand, wrapped one arm around her waist, pulled her into his arms and said with a smile "I just fed you last night, what? The thought of not seeing me for a while makes you feel lost?"
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Thank you very much, I've read all your advice carefully and it's very well put!
ch 0 1 My Mother is the Emperor
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Thank you very much, but if I change this sentence, your reply will be deleted (this should be a WN-specific feature) which would be a shame. So I would like to keep my error and let the reader see your suggestion for me, what do you think of this?
A young boy stood in a teleportation formation and waved goodbye to a beautiful woman, handsome and distinguished.
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Thank you very much, but if I change this sentence, your reply will be deleted (this should be a WN-specific feature) which would be a shame. So I would like to keep my error and let the reader see your suggestion for me, what do you think of this?[img=recommend]
Qin Tian grabbed his mother's hand, wrapped one arm around her waist, pulled her into his arms and said with a smile "I just fed you last night, what? The thought of not seeing me for a while makes you feel lost?"
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Oh~
The beautiful woman didn't resist her son's rudeness and squeezed those huge huge breasts against his chest "I'm not going to miss you, I'm going to rest and deal with the affairs of the court in your absence for a few days, I haven't been to court for a long time since you came, I haven't come down from bed all day, if this goes on, those ministers will be advising me by death"
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Ahem, I will amend it as appropriate when you point out all the errors, thank you for the suggestion.
And the beautiful woman was wearing a loose civilian dress, but it was unkempt, the whole dress slipped down and exposed her majestic big tits, her white, snow-like skin shone dazzlingly in the sunlight, the woman was beautiful, like a ripe fruit, delicious and juicy, with willow eyebrows and almond eyes and cherry mouth, a plump breast and thin waist and peach buttocks, what a stunningly beautiful and beautiful woman.
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Thank you for your advice
And the beautiful woman was wearing a loose civilian dress, but it was unkempt, the whole dress slipped down and exposed her majestic big tits, her white, snow-like skin shone dazzlingly in the sunlight, the woman was beautiful, like a ripe fruit, delicious and juicy, with willow eyebrows and almond eyes and cherry mouth, a plump breast and thin waist and peach buttocks, what a stunningly beautiful and beautiful woman.
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Hu Jiu Li felt that this was against ethics and morals, after all, Qin Tian was already with her daughter.
This makes the side of Hu Jiu Li look at the heart is very unpleasant, this guy just now was teasing her, and now surprisingly in front of her, and her own daughter and I am flirting ...
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Yes, very much looking forward to your corrections to my work!
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This makes the side of Hu Jiu Li look at the heart is very unpleasant, this guy just now was teasing her, and now surprisingly in front of her, and her own daughter and I am flirting ...
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Hahaha, I'd also like your suggestions and corrections for my novel if you can.[img=recommend]
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What? I Actually Reincarnated As Stepping Stone In Another World?
Fantasy · SaintOfDarkness
Hi, is there something wrong with my expression, I actually revised this paragraph many times while editing it
This makes the side of Hu Jiu Li look at the heart is very unpleasant, this guy just now was teasing her, and now surprisingly in front of her, and her own daughter and I am flirting ...
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Haha, this race is about to become extinct, it's not easy to find another nine-tailed fox. Although Wu Bingchan's mother is not strong, but her beauty is as beautiful as a heavenly fairy
Wu Bingchan's eyes were red, now she was in a very excited mood, so she didn't notice Qin Tian's eyes, but the big fox could see very clearly that Qin Tian had been sizing her up, especially her breasts, and Qin Tian's fiery eyes seemed to want to eat her.
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
Body and soul, I made a typo, now change it
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
I'm sorry I forgot to add the double quotes, I'll add them soon
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Eastern · Daoistmpp
If you are a respectable person, you don't want to have a relationship with a poor-tempered, lowly, unattractive woman. You don't even want to have anything to do with them because all they care about is your money.[img=recommend]
ch 25 Canglan Imperial Capital
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