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her = hers.
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My Billionaire Ex-Husband Chase Me Back
Urban · PurpleLight
"died long" should be "died long ago".
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Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
Eastern · Odayaka
This sounds like it is reffering to "White Knight Syndrome" and not any note to race.
Or maybe he was just that white person with white savior syndrome, acting like a hero to the people in third world countries like Asia and Africa to show off their kindness and mercy to the world...
The Alchemists
Urban · Missrealitybites
This is unclear to English speakers. More detail needed.
To cite another example that is even more inappropriate, but straightforward, the character for "lamp" is written as "灯," but pronounced "lamp."
Becoming a Wizard by Starting From the Mind Closure Technique
Fantasy · Bodhisattva Hammer
goods
"Then how about my good!?", Lucas slightly raises his voice. If he didn't sell his goods, the loss will be enormous.
Restart:Untalented Man
Fantasy · Spartzan
thinking much? over-thinking much? thinking on the wrong track? Unsure of what this is working towards on this sentence thought.
Henry was left speechless. After all, all this while, he had simply thought that he could perhaps learn all the skills that he had purchased from the system. But it turned out that he was thinking much.
The Soul System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
tied = tide. Mispelling
[Congratulations. It has been noted that you are special. And for that reason, since the monster tide is used to test you, and it has been realized that the monster tied is useless to you, the apocalypse has decided on a creature that will be able to give you a real test.]
The Soul System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
dictate should be "discern" or "discover" or "view" her race ...
Your skill level is too low to dictate her race; and detailed attributes!
Ghoul King's Harem
Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
whole = hole
Jivan walked to her body then said from above:" That was not a killing poison, it was just something to numb her from feeling the pain from the stab, she will wake up soon but now i will have to heal the whole you made in her body "
First Stygian Diviner:Apocalypse
Fantasy · Isaac_black
harden = garden
Breathing a sigh of relief, Jiang Hao planned to use his Clear and Pure Heart ability tonight to read the book. But first, he needed to go to the Spirit Herb harden and sell some talismans.
Cultivating In Secret Beside A Demoness
Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy
Take care to not to nick the...
"Next we do an cut from the testicles to the chest. Take care to not the internal organs."
Graeae: Land of beauty and nightmares
Fantasy · TheLastOne95
saves = people
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Help!: I Think My System Is Trying To Kill Me!
History · lumydee
sick me = sick man
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Help!: I Think My System Is Trying To Kill Me!
History · lumydee
cooling = cooking
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Help!: I Think My System Is Trying To Kill Me!
History · lumydee
you opened now
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It All Started With Lightning
Fantasy · monstersells
do her eyes? Do you mean that her eyes are also glowing green? then "Her hair is Glowing green, which mirrors her eyes." or something close to that.
Her hair is Glowing green, do her eyes.
Super Thief
Fantasy · Justin_Gabventure
What are the tater elements? Not sure it is a word as it comes off as the only thing close is a potate. Do you mean other cold temperture based elements?
She is the god of frost, ice, and tater elements. She can also be called the sovereign of ice.
Super Thief
Fantasy · Justin_Gabventure
Missing a word after "they had long MISSING that" . thought? feared?
They had long that their chicken friend are dead, and from what they are seeing right now the whole chicken clan had been massacred by this boy, but still, they did not think much of that.
Super Thief
Fantasy · Justin_Gabventure
Divorce is only if the wedding happened. A broken engagement or canceled engagement would be a better way to say that.
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Is the level Primordial overkill? Even a mid-level Elemental Mastery bloodline would be excessive in all of the elements, right?
Bloodline: Primordial Elemental Bloodline
Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
Fantasy · RealmWeaver