Webnovel Author: Ased - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Disgusting. When writing the novel, the author decided to turn off his logic and intelligence and let his eighth-grade syndrome run wild. Why did the warden give him a VR helmet when you can theoretically do anything in it? His name is taken from the protagonist of the game Prototype. The whole plot is based on luck. In comparison, this would be the equivalent of Chinese garbage. Why did he get the legendary growth item in the beginning? Why did he give up the world announcement when he agreed to take the ranking without hiding his level? I won't say anything about how he got the class and the teacher. The whole thing is really disgusting. Author, don't denigrate an already small MMORPG fanbase.

One of the best fanfics about Fate. The author has done a good job of gathering and using information, although there are some problems with the main character. Maybe I can't understand him as a reader, but it's really annoying when he cries for no "good reason". You did a great job with the world, but not with the main character....

How can MC be a normal person when he has an IQ like bread? The author said that MC is stupid, but this really goes beyond stupid to the point of degenerate.

The rating is inflated. Their real rating is 1 star. There is no information about who the MC was before his rebirth and who he is now. Only the general background is given. No information about the actual affair he got into. Also, he's already annoying with his "she", "her" when he's already introduced her as the mistress of the twilight. Then, by what bitching miracle, he was able to trade INFORMATION for author points when he should have changed the PLOT. Also, why the hell did a chunk of information take the form of an egg in order to grow? I only made it to chapter 5-7 of this disgusting novel.

The rating is clearly inflated or the author just removed all the negative reviews. I'll start at the beginning. First: bad writing. I don't know how it is with spelling, so I'll just highlight that. Second: weird MC the author chose. I don't know what kind of light he wants to show him in. He's just weird even to me. Third: how could he have been friends with Emma since childhood and dated her if she's from a noble family. Her status isn't confirmed by others until the author has her on stage. Fourth: there is no backstory for the MC. Fifth: why there is a "janitor" class with E+ potential (I've already forgotten). In short, a novel where the author didn't decide on a plot and wrote on the fly, making up all sorts of stupid encounters and royals in the bushes. It didn't last more than 12 chapters.

2/3 of the novel is just filler with surveys, and the chapters with the actual plot are only about 1000 words. The Gojo clan is not described at all. Too long and clichéd dialogues, similar to the communication of the main characters from China. In short, this fanfic is an underwritten, clichéd fanfic that I wouldn't recommend unless you're an extreme JJK fan.

It's a shame that it wasn't shown enough. Almost all manhwa based on Korean short stories are of excellent quality. Hunter Suicide is the best in the romance genre, especially in one episode.