Webnovel Author: isyon - Novel Collection

For now, no. But rest assured, I haven't dropped it, it's just that I don't have much time to write right now.

This story is actually pretty good with good pacing, the characters are well developed and the story is made to make you want to read more and know what will happen, overall very good, the sole problem being that the world the characters are living in is not yet developed but since the novel is just starting I guess that's normal.

story really interesting, just some grammatical errors in the first chapter but beside that, it's really good

Thanks for reviewing and pointing out the flaws, I'll try to correct them.

The story is really well written and enticing with the main character well developed as well, truly a great story

I think that this story is really great and pleasing, i just love the shift from serious moment to hilarious moments, like, in the first chapter everything was serious and all, but in the second I couldn't hold myself from laughing, really great

story is great and author made an effort to explain everything and made it very simple to comprehend, really great

The concept of the story is quite original, and the plot is well-explained. The only issue might be that it progresses a bit too quickly, especially in the first three chaoters. Other than that, the story is intriguing and makes you eager to find out what happens next.

I'm still not there, but I will definitely consider your suggestion

please do, suggestions would greatly help me

there is no such thing as Yuri or NTR( hate that kind of stuff)

I think Reviewing and giving 5 stars my own work is considered as shameless🤔, but I'll still do it because i consider that it's worth it, if you like it continue reading it will become more exciting as the story advance, if you don't like the story stick to reading anyway you will surely find exciting later.If you like the story don't forget supporting the book😅