Don't usually leave reviews of stories but seeing so few reviews this story has, I'm driven to give my personal opinion on this story. Overall for the short review, the story is interesting and fun to read while being very lore accurate to the Fallout universe. The long review, this story excels in every category, the first and my personal favorite is Character design, I feel like the author took full advantage of the Fallout Universe in this area, every character including Adam the MC has very interesting back stories and they feel like NPCs you'll run into in the Fallout games. My personal favorites characters are Adam and Deccanus, Adam instead of being the typical edge lord Anti hero you'll normal read about in fanfics, hes a very compassionate and likeable character, he fits his character outline perfectly. Deccanus is also very compelling character that is trying to get over his past life and find something to live for other than his blind loyalty to a flawed system, also the first fight with Deccanus was pure badass. The World building is very interesting and exciting, I love the introduction of Renaissance a settlement filled with hippies and good vibes in the wasteland, and the other settlements feel alive from the architecture that fit the wasteland vibe perfectly to the very interesting venders. Also the factions are very thoughtout and are slowly introduced in a realistic way. And I can't put into words how knowledgeable the author of the story is when it comes to the Fallout universe. Speaking of realism, the story development feels very organic, from all of Adam's motives to his interactions with the wasteland of Chicago, not only that but the Author has very good plot points in this story like Adam's underlining origin story or the looming battles involving the factions in the greater Chicago wasteland. Lasty what kelp me reading the story up to 180 chapter is the Kingdom building/Group development aspect of this story, Adam slowly building himself in the wasteland, upgrading to better gear and weapons, expending his party with interesting and powerful characters, building his reputation with the people of the wasteland, establishing a safe house and even with plans of taking over a Vault in making it into his home is simply amazing. I haven't had this fun with a fandic in awhile, Kingdom building is truly my weak spot. Thanks Author for the amazing story, I will be checking out the Patreon and any other projects you are working on.
Hulking men, 8 to 10 feet tall, wearing animal skins, hides and loose scraps of armor. They carried makeshift weapons like a club made of a rebar and concrete pulled right from a wall, a sledgehammer which had clearly seen better days and one who held a whole car door like a shield. Most of them were green in color, though a few had a bit more of a red hue to them, and one was blue. The blue one carried what looked like a car bumper but outfitted to be a giant sword? He couldn't tell completely considering he was so far away. But there was no doubt in his mind. These were super mutants.
Fallout, Second Life
Video Games · Jareddc
I plan to come back this year, I've just been dealing with IRL stuff, LOL, I can't give up on such a funny Idea.
Lol, those are some great ideas, don't be surprised if I use some.
Very Interesting, that's why I decided to write it because there are so many possibilities with King as a character, but ultimately I decided against giving King powers because I feel it'll take away from his character if he knew he had powers and wanted to get stronger. Even if I had him become a Byounder and advance through the Sequences by pure luck, I feel it'll make King seem like an idiot or an airhead, the fact he isn't able to realize he's powerful, instead I'm going to give him Universal shattering luck and he'll forever be unaware of it. I think this way makes it more funny and interesting for the story and readers but also it'll be fun for me to write it.
Damn, your idea is great, tbh, I planned to keep him a regular human who's mistaken as a beyonder. But I'll have to think about your idea and see if I feel like writing something that complex.
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original Lord Of Mysterious: Untold Story Of King
Read as King discovers a new life in the Great Peace Loving World Of Lord Of Mysteries, and watch as he tries and balance his day-to-day life with the many strange encounters and situations he finds himself in. Will 'The Strongest Man on Earth' survive or will he fall to the many dangers that lurk in the dark? Lol, this was just a fun throwaway Idea I had, and decided to try and make something of it, also for all the LOMs fanboys this won't be a perfect fanfic that follows all the original story's logic. So, please spare me the complaints and hate comments, I just want to write a fun, light-hearted, comically fanfic. Also, I don't own any copyrights to King or any Lord Of Mysteries story elements.4 Chs 35 Collections
GOT: Reborn as a Martell
Book&Literature · MoonLight18