Webnovel Author: Mugetsu085 - Novel Collection

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Really liked your imagination and the world you created. The quality of your writing is not bad but its not good either. There is room for improvement there. But otherwise, its an enjoyable read. Keep writing mate

Ravenfalls

Fantasy · abyssallock

Mugetsu085

1yr

Replied to Deborah_13

Thanks Deb!

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Fantasy · Mugetsu085

Mugetsu085

1yr

Replied to Imsuperberbs20

thanks mate. I have 11 chapters out now. hope to get better at telling the story with time

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Fantasy · Mugetsu085

Mugetsu085

1yr

Commented

I like story line,but you may need to edit a bit.

ch 0 1 Prologue: Birth and Expectations

There's Something Wrong With You, My Lord!

LGBT+ · Imsuperberbs20

Mugetsu085

1yr

Commented

Looking good,room for improvement though. Keep at it.

ch 0 1 A New School

Hidden Secret: Hidden ties between rivals.

Teen · Deborah_13

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There's Something Wrong With You, My Lord!

Hidden Secret: Hidden ties between rivals.