the quality isnt the best here and i will prob update all of my stores allat so go read them again ;)
ch 10 A meeting with the Alpha
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not my best work its under heavy maintenance
" to think the third hokage would give me the notes of the second hokage is crazy " kayomi said while smiling to himself, within the notes there was the flying thunder god technique aswell as impure reincarnation technique, I wanted to ask for the scroll it self but i dont think he would give it to a 6 year old. nonetheless with the notes I can use it to create my very own flying thunder god technique.
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maybe spice it up with bleach atlest you're insides while be clean
[ Lack of sleep with poor diet has Caused the weakening of the immune system thus with over consumption of alcohol has caused liver failure ]
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Rip, there goes my ego, absolutely right. That is some large plot hole. there any other mistakes you find?
The strength of the inuzuka clan comes from there ninkin which they bound from birth but as a orphan I have no parents which would help me find my ninkin or companion but there are plenty of different ways to grow stronger so to train the already sharp senses i've been seeking into a nearby forest to sharpen them more and learn some survival skills
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using u is a bad habit of mine i will work one it :> and thanks for the tip brooski
Getting curious obito asked * does it give u special abilitys like the sharingan? *
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appreciate the tip i will try and use it next time :P
ch 0 2 A Friend?
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he's young, so the limit was 30 clones, but as he trains, his chakra coils expand, allowing for monsters chakra
He assigned 10 clones to read the books he borrowed from the library whilst 10 would practices the leaf sticking exercise the rest would try and find him a suitable taijutsu
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i actually didn't think like that. I was just focusing on giving him strom release :D
-kekkei genkai- storm release
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I feel like I rushed it too much what do u guys think?
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: The first hunt
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thank you for the tip i will try it out
(naruto fanfic) The beast of war
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