Heavy_Fizzing

very good story so far (50), but think the story can be slowed down a bit to fully explore the world your building, and introducing characters that aren't just 2 chapters later killed. The best thing you've done so far in the novel is NOT making everyone stupid and that should be a focus for you as you can leverage this fact to separate this story form most the slop on Webnovel. More arcs involving schemes for him to slaughter towns, cities, provenances, not just imma Kill these people for the points. Work the system into him achieving something more.

The story is enjoyable to read hope you continue on this beautiful book but please post the map or the chapter that’s hidden in. Great work keep it up.

fantastic story with realistic world building and history, the most captivating part of the story is the well thought-out plot as through the multiple POV's we get a layered story of different factions and intrigue. Hope this story gets its recognition and support it deserves, good luck Author.