A very interesting idea bassed on one of my beloved genres, yet made with its own uniqueness.
A simple, yet thought-out characters, an immersive worldbuilding.
The start is great and the potential of the story is huge.
I would suggest to work on the punctuation and text style, to further improve the immersion.
Keep up the great work!
Webnovel
A very interesting idea bassed on one of my beloved genres, yet made with its own uniqueness. A simple, yet thought-out characters, an immersive worldbuilding. The start is great and the potential of the story is huge. I would suggest to work on the punctuation and text style, to further improve the immersion. Keep up the great work!