I’m a new author, so bare with me on somethings! Constructive criticism is always welcome on any of my work! Thank for taking the time to read my stuff!✌️
2022-10-22 Joined Global
I have been curious, how do you plan your novels?
ch 39 Chapter 39: Not Invincible!
Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
Hello, I was reading your other novel and I love it! (Rise of the Pervert Primordial). I don't mean to be rude and ultimately it is your novel, but is there any yuri in this novel? I really don't like it and its a deal breaker for me. This is just me being picky, you still make great stories!
ch 0 1 Living hell
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
Do you plan your entire novel before you start writing?
ch 0 -1 Character References (Spoiler Alert)
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
Just with less tails
Sorry, I’m still a student and have work as well and Im not going to have time to post for the next few days. But I promise Im not dropping it! Updates may just take some time!
ch 16 Before the trip & Alice's past...
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
Thank you!
ch 14 Another day...
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
Thank you for your support!
ch 14 Another day...
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
That's not gonna happen this time, I'm sorry. But there will most likely be a time skip at some point soon.
ch 10 He wont wake up...
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
I did mention that she talked about it with them but I didn't want to take the time to write about it, I was afraid of overexplaining and make the chapter feel drawn-out.
ch 10 He wont wake up...
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
200 is max intimacy. Starting from 100 is a familial or romantic intimacy.
Intimacy: 150(Familial/Romantic?) ]
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
Yep, I should have put it more clearly. Thank you for pointing that out to me!
Core Stage: 10
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
Yeah, I like the conquers path but I have no idea where that harem is headed. 😅 I hope I don't disappoint when it comes to the harem, and while he will have to act a little it wont be to trick the heroines' hearts. If you have any more feedback I would love to hear it!
Thinking back to the game, Dante hopped out of bed and sat in front of his computer. He found Grand Roses while trying to cure his incurable boredom and quickly found it interesting. The amount of content and the freedom it gave caught Dante's attention and ever since was his main way to pass time when he wasn't studying or going to parties.
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
Yeah, you're right, it does sound a little confusing doesn't it. But yes he has played the game. Thank you for your comment!
Thinking back to the game, Dante hopped out of bed and sat in front of his computer. He found Grand Roses while trying to cure his incurable boredom and quickly found it interesting. The amount of content and the freedom it gave caught Dante's attention and ever since was his main way to pass time when he wasn't studying or going to parties.
Fantasy · RKPhoenix
Hello! I was curious if there will be any yuri in your novels between harem members? I hope not, it has always been a deal breaker for me. This is just me being picky, I'm sure its a great story!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Luan Dimas
Rise of the White Dragon
Fantasy · Lruska