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Just to give you an idea of what the weaker red light virus does to a person it causes extreme mutation including a denser muscle mass meaning you are stronger harder to kill and can even survive gunshot wounds to the Head heart lungs and other places the blacklight virus that Alex Mercer has was a superior virus to the red light virus and that it brought out better attributes and an increased capability of evolution. To clarify what this means he would gain the specialties of that tarantula he ate he would gain the specialties of that deer he ate he would also absorb their memories skills and their significant genetic differences from the human genetic basis. Silk production better hearing smelling etc to tack on among other things or the ability to manipulate limbs better and more accurate predatory vision with increased eyes etc. That wild wolf, in the face of someone with even minor knowledge of what Mercer was capable of after consuming a scientist aka his host form, was the ability to survive and revive from several gunshot and biological death to then adapt and revive. The virus constantly refines you. The reason the blacklight virus is so deadly is due to the fact it will take precursor dna and activate it. Bringing out your peaks and the the peaks of your supposed ancestral dna. In short as soon as he killed that deer and absorbed it the only thing in that force that would have been able to leave a scratch on him would have likely just been maybe a bear and that's only if you let it hit you. Considering at the start of acquisition of the virus he's likely able to: exert several hundred pounds of strength push or pull jump upwards of 20 ft vertical run at upwards of 21 mph sustained into perpetuity since he doesn't have a need to take a break or ingest food while he has biomass. And pretty well punched through 12 in of concrete with relative ease.

Very good.

You are a great writer, I hope you enjoy writing these as much as I enjoy reading them. Take care.

Seems good. I look forward to seeing more.

Why seal Zetsu? He can be killed. The only reason he was sealed with kaguya was because he hid in her sleeve. Dust or particle style could have been used to eliminate him.

Odd he didn't get any killing or weapon/martial skills... I mean 1000 at once would be a hellish amount to kill in a 24 hour period.

It's hard to read this otherwise good story.