Webnovel Author: VertiKalEl - Novel Collection

Thank you for trying out my work and giving feedback. I really do appreciate it. I'm also very very very very very glad that you liked it!

Being 100% honest? The author asked for feedback so I came here with no huge expectations but... I'm quite surprised honestly. The content is refreshing! The ideas of nobles and dungeons being connected... They system. the mysterious woman - they all make me curious and begging for more! I honestly feel sad that it is just a few chapters. I love binge reading and this would have been a perfect read. If I read it when it's so short I'll be so dissatisfied because I'll surely crave more. Keep up the good work author-kun?

Imma be very honest here and say that the start seemed cliche but it turns out that neither hero nor demon lord is MC. The MC comes off as a badass at the beginning but I feel like he is poorly executed. Anyway I have only read to chapter 6 so I'll just take it with a grain of salt and assume this is meant to be a slice of life with an OP MC. Hopefully the story improves over time as the author learns to develop. Either way, I would conclude this review by saying that this is an unpolished gen with loads of untapped potential

I won't lie here. Only read up to chapter three and I would point out that it is a great start in terms of storyline but the writing style seems inhuman - almost like AI. I would like to give the author the benefit of the doubt and assume that he wrote it himself before asking AI to rewrite with perfect grammar or else... All that aside, very good start. A good storyline I see here. Give it a try. If you don't find slightly inhuman perfection jarring like I do then this would be a good fit for you. I also like the fact that MC is an ordinary guy before transmigrated, a breath of fresh air to see an old man mc

Thank you for your honest feedback Daoist! I will continue to work hard. Indeed this story is different from what one would expect from a smut with such a potentially powerful MC, but it is what i would have preferred to find in a smut so i decided to pen one down myself.either way, I am glad you like it! I look forward to your continued supoport and feedback!

What a dunce... pretty sure WN doesn't allow contracted authors to have multiple accts. Won't even bother with this one