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Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
3.82 (25 ratings)
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Abandoned on the battlefield, all he could do was endure the hellish life.
He had no family to rely on, as they had turned their backs on him.
A soul from the battlefield, Lucavion Thorne.
But apparently, he was a lot more than a mere soldier, as fate had many things stored for him.
A soul from Earth....When they merged, he realized.
He was a one-chapter villain whose sole purpose was to serve as a background setting for the protagonist's tragedy.
But was he truly a one-chapter villain, or did fate still have some tricks up its sleeve?
Watch the story of Lucavion Thorne as he finds the purpose behind his transmigration and discovers his own fate.
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One or two chapters daily.
Chapter Length 1500-2000
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five star from me, cuz why not. i enjoyed both of authors previous works. all the best for this book also.
The writing is good and all, I actually really like the background and story progression since it seems to stray from the op mc cliche; however, there are firstly, some fillers that I cannot understand why they're there other than to make the readers irritated. On top of that, the novel doesn't need the transmigration tag because for as long as I read, few dozens chapters in, you could've removed the transmigration tag and the introduction chapter, and it would be the exact same thing, like there would be no major differences whatsoever. The tag itself feels like a cheap attempt at clickbaiting that unfortunately worked, reading this novel, for me, was like having fishbone stuck in your throat-- Like I know it supposed to be a tragedy and all, I can perfectly comprehend that, but at least, AT LEAST, makes it so that the transmigrator is actually unique somewhat compared to the native denizens.
man!!! the story would have been perfect with some revenge but author made the MC too soft. ruined the story for me and what's the point of reincarnation when he no longer remembers his old memories
I may be biased due to reading the author other works (Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest) This is very good start. Still too early to give my full thoughts of the story but from knowing the author previous work I know I'm going to love this story. One thing I love what the author does is he takes his time with the main character development and power level. I am so tired of reading a op main character who barley worked hard to obtain their power. shattered innocents we see the mc struggle and I am so excited to see how he will prevail and get back at everyone who wronged him. Maybe I'm just odd but I like seeing a main character who we see starts at the bottom and crawl their way to the top. Overall, I'm quite excited to see how this story will unravel. i do hope the author will have the main character have guy friends (I do not mean Bl lol) Typically with stories with harems the mc only surrounded by women. They don't have guy friends if they do it's like comedy relief. I hope I explain that well like I want the mc having his own group his bros. I hope explained what I thought well this was my first time writing a review so if I made a mistake cut me some slack.
Bro, have you really given up on EROTIC RPG ??you took a new novel ,which you are going to update 1 chapter everyday . But you haven't updated a single chapter of erotic rpg for 6 month straight. Now you are treating it like middle child .
I can see that there potential bu the author just rushes throw thing Makin It impossible to get attached to character only at a surface leave. dialogue is boring and uninteresting. the author doesn't know how to create natural flowin conflict and events as they just forced into the story etc the masters identify and the hes end and back story , the isikai shi way is I there, there's alot of tell no showing in this story
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A typical Isekai kid gets put into a villain character and has no problems before getting transmigrated and then crime happens and blah blah no one believes the Mc he gets disowned and Banished to hell hole blah blah recover himself stables and works to get stronger and all that typical stuff I haven't read all 50 free chapters but I feel the generics stuff he gets forbidden power or something and nonsense continues to happen I bet while the true villains live there life up and get random chapter with there nonsense and also the fmc girl who also got framed hates him because she believes the person who ruined her whole life I do not understand that plot point to me make no sense. Reading the first 10 chapters was downright disappointing in the first chapters he gives his Opinion on the novel he got transported to and I took the world out of my mouth for this novel
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Bruh if you are going to write by using A.I. then make it less obvious. I am 43 chapters in, and it is painful how all the internal monologues are just repeated ideas in different wording. When other characters face off, like in chap 43, then it is obvious that an A.I. is narrating the emotions and dialogue. If you are not using A.I. then you are simply overdoing it - there are better ways to describe character emotions and development.
Characters seem extremely one dimensional, internal monologues of the main character seem written by AI, as "never give up", but really 0 motivations. Almost every other character is an after thought, as he somehow joins a team in the army, but you feel no attachment to them as there is never any personal connections or in-depth character development.
Author, This is best novel from your collection and story is also good with how our MC is getting strong by hard work and slowly. Consider yourself very lucky as I don't review and i am making exception for you...
Okay first of all the story is pretty cliche (I will not lie about that) but the story has a potential and if you read more you will realize that it is pretty good.[img=recommend] Note: I will agree with her sister that Reverse-Harem is much better than Harem.🤣
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Too depressing for me.. each chapter is just a consistent downer. Not that the novel is bad, on the contrary it’s actually quite good.
This story is really good in my opinion, The story is kind of slow in the beginning but after the 2-year time skip after chap 50 the mc develops in his character and also his strength the problems I have is that a few characters designs are kind of lacking with some characters that seem to be important for the future plot, And also the World building is kind of nice so far but currently since the story is just starting is can be improved upon
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the best part should be the transmission. nothing interesting happenes but besides the first chapter, there is literally no point in having it. it adds nothing to the story, zero twist. it just a basic medieval story about a fallen noble that was lied to. there is nothing wrong with that. but that what I signed up to read.
Authors username checks out. The book is very dark and also kind of frustrating to read. It is well-written though. I feel super bad for the mc and had to stop reading because the story is depressing.
This novel is well written, the author focuses a lot on the development of the mc with a slow pace. I recommend reading it.
haven't read it yet but giving it five stars cause of the yandere tag 🫡 *will edit if it sucks.
Writing quality is superb Updating stability nothing to say Story and character development. If there were tragedy and slow paced tags I won’t be frustrated 49 chapters in and mc is still canon fodder The frustration is just killing me Everyone seems to bully mc alone and despite his so called star devouring (spoiler) some rank 3 bozo is like heaven while he’s earth(apparently not as talented it’s made to be) If you like slow paced novels where mc is traumatized in more than 30 chapters while growing like a snail this book is for you