I'm new to this whole writing thing.
This has been a cool read so far! I like the idea of starting off with a reference guide that reader's can check quickly if they have to know something about the world. Quite a useful idea! Also your writing is on point! Also bonus points for cool character names! A definite good read and I look forward to what's next!
Fantasy · Jeffery_XXVI
Well the title didn't lie. This is quite a macabre delight to read. The MC seems to be cold, ruthless and calculated. Would love to see where this takes her. And since everyone seems to be as nonchalant about death around her i feel like it's a fantastic setup for a unique reading experience! I look forward to more!
History · Nyxxie_Auclair
Cool world building! And really fast paced! Started reading and damn it goes hard right from the get go. This story is definitely going to be one to look out for
Fantasy · Kirito_K5
Damn I'm getting Attack On Titan PTSD lol
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An interesting and unique premise that mirrors a lot of possible real and current crises. Lets see how it plays out! I hope we get a lot of technical depth with relation to the story in the future
Sci-fi · somi_n
This is shaping up to be quite intriguing. It's written almost like a webtoon would be which would make for a pretty cool adaptation! Good read!
Fantasy · ikimono
Hey! I have a friend named Akhil! :D
ch 0 1 Vortex
I like the flow of this story. Also first person perspectives are always great. Always a fan of a great modern day slice-of-life style story. Can't wait to see where it goes!
Teen · Winnie
heheh transfer student life
ch 0 2 CHAPTER 2
Ooooh first person perspective!
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1
This is such a pleasure to read. Personally I enjoy longer chapters because it gives you time to appreciate little details. Added to library for sure! The writing is wonderful and there's a beautiful rhythm to it.
History · DollhousX
This is so well written! I love the little details like his hair smelling of peppermint. Your writing focusses on so much detail while still leaving just enough to our imaginations!
ch 0 1 Prologue
It's always nice to read a Murim from time to time. Such an interesting world! Very intriguing and would love to see what is to come.[img=recommend]
History · Little_North_Star
Author review here! I've got a lot planned but I don't really hope to make this story longer than a 100 chapters in total. I hope you all enjoy watching Helios and Vinca develop as much as I do when writing! Would greatly appreciate reviews and just general discussions! Much love everyone! Thank you for reading!
Fantasy · TheStrangeCreator
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This has been a cool read so far! I like the idea of starting off with a reference guide that reader's can check quickly if they have to know something about the world. Quite a useful idea! Also your writing is on point! Also bonus points for cool character names! A definite good read and I look forward to what's next!
Daemon: Charade of a thousand souls
Fantasy · Jeffery_XXVI