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Axel_Kiss_5577
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Nah I’m just a little lazy to do the yoda voice time on time.
Grand Master Yoda raised an eyebrow. "Your way? Your way is all wrong. You need to use the force the right way. You have no idea what you're doing and how to control it."
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
Don’ t understand this question that much can you please elaborate?
ch 18 Notice
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
I don’t really have Yoda be the original yoda, as you know it is a fan fic a story that I believe is a better opening to the clone wars sure it has some blunders but this is my first time writing
Yoda smirked. "And how are you planning on doing that without using the force, hmm? By taking him on a date? Or maybe by getting him drunk and seducing him? Those are the only ways to manipulate someone in your mind. Even in your own eyes, you're manipulating the youngling. How can you say that you know nothing about the dark side when you have used it yourself? You've done many bad things using the dark side. I can see it in your eyes. I can feel it in your heart. You where evil and with the bad foundation the younling has he has a high chance falling to the darkside. But don't worry; I'll help you out. You can take him under your wing once again."
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
Thx, I didn’ think about the mediclorian count since I was just trying to build up a story but much appreciated,
The now young baby called Alix is now in the hands of the Jedi, he is the last member of a long extinct race that has a peerless connection with the force so great that they could be Considered Half Gods, The Zeffo however he was an elite breed evolved due to time looking more human with instead large fully black eyes. Now the young baby is 5 years old and will begin his Jedi youngling Training on Coruscant
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
What does cheese mean in this context?
ch 0 4 Weapon training
Mandolorian Stormtrooper
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
I don’ know what that the actual liked leng fir capter would be, please do tell me
ch 17 Attack on Naboo
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
Don't worry, I'm an amature.
ch 0 4 New Master?
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
But ye, what I have found in your messages is that you surely have not come here with good intentions and read my fan fiction, so I will kindly ask you to stop commenting or stop reading, I do not tolerate this behaviour from readers, it is really childish.
ch 0 1 Reincarnation
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
Might change it later on but I'm gonna stick with the main idea right now.
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Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
Fan fin, its my aprouch on how to make the arc, you may not like it but I have not seen 300 people screeming to me how lore incorrect the characters are.
Yoda smirked. "And how are you planning on doing that without using the force, hmm? By taking him on a date? Or maybe by getting him drunk and seducing him? Those are the only ways to manipulate someone in your mind. Even in your own eyes, you're manipulating the youngling. How can you say that you know nothing about the dark side when you have used it yourself? You've done many bad things using the dark side. I can see it in your eyes. I can feel it in your heart. You where evil and with the bad foundation the younling has he has a high chance falling to the darkside. But don't worry; I'll help you out. You can take him under your wing once again."
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
Its a fan fiction, it doesnt have to be fully lore correct it can even be completely incorrect.
Yoda smirked. "And how are you planning on doing that without using the force, hmm? By taking him on a date? Or maybe by getting him drunk and seducing him? Those are the only ways to manipulate someone in your mind. Even in your own eyes, you're manipulating the youngling. How can you say that you know nothing about the dark side when you have used it yourself? You've done many bad things using the dark side. I can see it in your eyes. I can feel it in your heart. You where evil and with the bad foundation the younling has he has a high chance falling to the darkside. But don't worry; I'll help you out. You can take him under your wing once again."
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
With the god like I mean with the potential of the race and the ways they are able to use the force.
ch 0 1 Reincarnation
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
I knew that a Zeffo was larger than your avrage human male and thought that it would be apporiate.
After 2 years he surpassed them with ease and was ready to be taken as a Jedi Padawan. He was now 10 years old. He had grown into a fine young candidate to become a Padawan. He had Dark Black hair and pitch dark eyes. He had smooth tan skin and had a narrow face. He had a slim build. He was tall and had a strong posture. His height was 5'11. He was now a trainee.
Reincarnated as a Jedi?
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577
Sometimes I dream about cheese
ch 0 4 Weapon training
Mandolorian Stormtrooper
Others · Axel_Kiss_5577