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The pacing is pretty fast paced, so it was a little hard to keep up in the beginning. I wish I was just a bit slower so we could connect with the character some more. I am curious to see where the story goes, though. :)

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Well, this took a dark turn.

I move away from her and gaze at her unconscious face with her tongue lolling out, nothing of the previous elegance and coldness was to be found.

THE DUKE'S BASTARD BECOMES A DEMON LORD

THE DUKE'S BASTARD BECOMES A DEMON LORD

Fantasy · RealRomanLord

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You go, Natsumi.

"Try to touch me again and I'll break your hand", she said without any emotion in her voice

THE DUKE'S BASTARD BECOMES A DEMON LORD

THE DUKE'S BASTARD BECOMES A DEMON LORD

Fantasy · RealRomanLord

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Love the name Blackburn

The duke's eldest daughter gave me a lecture about 'how I am ruining the Blackburn name' and 'how it was a mistake for me to be born'.

THE DUKE'S BASTARD BECOMES A DEMON LORD

THE DUKE'S BASTARD BECOMES A DEMON LORD

Fantasy · RealRomanLord

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I'm getting female Aladdin vibes.

The monkey followed her quietly through the trees and finally perched back on her shoulders.

Let's make history!

Let's make history!

Fantasy · daylightmoon123445

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Well, that's unfortunate.

Goodbye, escape pod. He closed his eyes again. His head was starting to feel tight and he felt like throwing up. No, worse than that. He felt like his organs would come off.

Let's make history!

Let's make history!

Fantasy · daylightmoon123445

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RUDE! They're scared, man.

He was in utter shock when he heard that. How is he going to explain that to this herd of goats down there?

Let's make history!

Let's make history!

Fantasy · daylightmoon123445

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Very true. Panicking will get you in deeper.

Deril was a very calm man. He knew how to handle any situation calmly and that's how they mostly tried to calm people down. Panic is never the right answer in a serious situation.

Let's make history!

Let's make history!

Fantasy · daylightmoon123445

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Thanks for pointing this out. I'll have to make note of that in a later chapter when she's talking on her past. :)

The memories hadn't come all at once. Rather, they began appearing in her dreams around the time she'd turned five, six years before the first man came to her room. Her mother had told her it was just an over creative mind and laughed it off.

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That's when she started having memories of her previous life, not when they started selling her body.

The memories hadn't come all at once. Rather, they began appearing in her dreams around the time she'd turned five, six years before the first man came to her room. Her mother had told her it was just an over creative mind and laughed it off.

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She was around 12/13 years old when they sold her body. 5 years old when she started having memories about her previous life.

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