dead drunk? sober means you aren't drunk anymore
They all started drinking copious amounts of beer until they were dead sober, and they all left at once.
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grumbled
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shy guy?
"Hmm, for now I'm feeling alright, albeit extremely weak. When I woke up, I was as skinny as a "shy man."
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where did cold blooded go 🤔
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Did you really pull a Dante against me? -> Did you really pull a Dante on me? (?)
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human puppets aye 👀
ch 26 Chapter 26 - Lot of rude people
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👀 excited 🙏
"This, won't. Do" Dante tried to speak, but his words were stuttered and hard to comprehend. "They will. All die. Failed product, need of. Life force."
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ch 17 Chapter 17 - Why is everyone so ruthless…
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good job carpe
ch 16 Chapter 16 - A pat
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i be liking your descriptions this chapter carpe, very nice
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 - Would you mind helping me?
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brother goblin is omnivorous fr
In the middle of the night, feeling hunger, he forgot about his usual mealtime and sought prey to feast upon. As he roamed, he spotted a small, frail human walking alone. His mouth watered, and his lower body heated up. It had been a long time since he had played with a goblin or a human, thanks to what the humans had done to him.
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gucci
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - A beginning
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review made at ch 1 prologue*Writer displays a decently strong writing ability and makes his scenes enjoyably descriptive with a solid pace that makes the prologue chapter quite atmospheric, introduces some interesting concepts as a hook in the prologue so if the writing quality perseveres I'd probably keep reading this regularlyalso has steampunk aspects, steampunk enjoyers rise upas an end note there were very minimal spelling/grammar errors that could have just been butter fingers so yeah this is very readable and could be fun
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