To Author, First, Even if you didn't read my regard fully please read (Note) written at last. Second, I read your novels around 8 months ago but there were only some hundred chapter now after you rewrite novels I have finish reading your novels. This novel is better than before and I know story will get more better in the future keep working. I think I can read more 10,000 chapter if it goes like this. Brother I have read many novels and have some experience hope you will read my points. 👇👇👇 1- Plot and information about clans, tribes, sects, realms, and other powers like pills, weapons, trading powers, information powers, pavallions, chambers, towers, etc. 2- Mc Character - I know his character will change in future. It will be ok if he is ruthless, selfish, use people for own use up to author (but mostly reader will agree they didn't want a Mc to be hero who save people's Or stupid and dumb. Enemies and offenders like angel, blessed,demon realm and clans like shui, Lei, Chen, clans they offend him again and again but he let them go. In story it's lower realm and they didn't know about other realm its ok but they are also cultivator so when he kill them it's better to kill their complete race, clan, realm etc. Or crippled them but those who want to kill him or make move against his womans its better to kill them all. Like Feng and Chen who want his women killing them in lower realms but in higher realm it will be better to kill their supporters and relatives who have other motives. 3- Mc is didn't have any abilities and knowledge and subordinates who submitte to him like he can have some races, clans, it doesn't matter whether they are from lower or upper realms he can make them power full with his abilities which other didn't. Like he can use sources, souls, cultivation knowledge, etc of his enemies or those who are dead in fights, clashes, war. Or with some other abilities.Only if it's not possible for other and only my have this ability .(Not his woman's) only his subordinate, slaves, whether they will have some disadvantages like less lifespan or negative effect if they agree. 4- Mc is only increasing strength with dual cultivation but it will be better if he has some adventures between 200 or 300 chapter gap or (get some other inheritance) other than primordial dragon. 5- Mc didn't have any ambitious (like whether he will become Emperor of only this universe or other also). 6- In chapter ( Xia Tian and others) are mentioned I have read other novels I hope they are not same other wise ending will be worse ending. Like ( BTTH, MU, TGR ) 7- I didn't know whether ( novel will end at this universe) or you plan to add other higher and Supreme universe like higher realms and ( Mc will be start his own journey to become powerfull after becoming real primordial dragon and Emperor of this universe ). But second one will be much better. 8- If novel will end at only this universe it has been better if about other universe was revealed when my reach immortal realms in cultivation. (But if Mc will go to higher or Supreme universe then on the contrary it is better. 9- Mc character is still too naive it will be better if got betray or his some information is leaked to grow his character. Mc share everything with his woman's atleast he should hide 1 or 2 important things. 10- In novel angels and demons names are eastern (while humans, beast, devils name are Chinese). For these (2 lower angel and demons realms) names are already written in future please try to only use fully eastern or fully Chinese names for higher realm demons and all other inhabitants. For now Mc name is Chinese so as reader I will recommend using Chinese names only but it's upon you or you can use only Eastern names. 11-( Lastly Tang Xiao about 5 parallel universe formed by him) if it's going to be true then it is worse I hope and request if Author can change it in future. (It can only be Tang Xiao thinking or scheme against Ling Yun or something else story) . But If theory in novel about 5 parallel universe formed like DOCTOR STRANGE and AVENGERS then it is truly worse and ugly. If novel end only in one universe in which Ling Yun is 5 universe can exist from start or they are separated it can be okay. But if Tang Xiao theory of 5 parallel universe is going to be truth at end it useless although ( technology and science is used in novel on lower realm and there is also upper realm) there no point if Ling Yun and his woman, s still are not going to change like cultivator and continue on them it's better to (leave cultivation) and switch science fiction novel. Little involvement like system and new residence and visit to one upper technology realm for few chapters its ok. But to much like using ( his Yu uncle vines and demon realm ruler, blessed realm ruler daughter ). Or there can other higher universe but still I didn't know where novel will end. And it can be Tang Xiao scheme to rule his universe or Tang Xiao can be a part of of hidden race, power, clan that treath universe of future (after all that hidden danger can be anything universe ending, lifespan ending or any other story. Note:- I hope Author will focus on less use of technology or stop using technology (Al left by tang Xiao is enough and it use in future can only be restricted to upper realm not to Supreme realms) because not sure Supreme realm is only one or more (Especially, Parallel Universe theory can be change or false, scheme in future chapters) it can also be like ( lord of no boundary Anime) there are 7 universe and (Valkarine Domination) etc. In these their are also many universe outer, inner, small etc. Whether other things change or not please focus on these 2 things. Not sure how many chapter will you write. Even if you write 5,000 or 10,000 chapter I will read because your novel is good but please try to upload more chapter on daily bases in 8 months there are only 600 chapter reading 1,2,3 chapter daily in annoying if you can't upload 10, 15 chapter daily atleast try to upload 5 or 6 chapters I will read your novels again in November hope there will be many Chapters to read keep working bro. About ratting I want to give 3 star because of my last 3 points I mentioned above in note about (technology, Tang Xiao theaory and chapters) but this novel is really good and I know author is working hard so I will give 4 star . Hope novel will get better especially in these 3 points i will come back and read soon if it get better in these 3 points in future then next time I will give 5 star.
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To Author, First, Even if you didn't read my regard fully please read (Note) written at last. Second, I read your novels around 8 months ago but there were only some hundred chapter now after you rewrite novels I have finish reading your novels. This novel is better than before and I know story will get more better in the future keep working. I think I can read more 10,000 chapter if it goes like this. Brother I have read many novels and have some experience hope you will read my points. 👇👇👇 1- Plot and information about clans, tribes, sects, realms, and other powers like pills, weapons, trading powers, information powers, pavallions, chambers, towers, etc. 2- Mc Character - I know his character will change in future. It will be ok if he is ruthless, selfish, use people for own use up to author (but mostly reader will agree they didn't want a Mc to be hero who save people's Or stupid and dumb. Enemies and offenders like angel, blessed,demon realm and clans like shui, Lei, Chen, clans they offend him again and again but he let them go. In story it's lower realm and they didn't know about other realm its ok but they are also cultivator so when he kill them it's better to kill their complete race, clan, realm etc. Or crippled them but those who want to kill him or make move against his womans its better to kill them all. Like Feng and Chen who want his women killing them in lower realms but in higher realm it will be better to kill their supporters and relatives who have other motives. 3- Mc is didn't have any abilities and knowledge and subordinates who submitte to him like he can have some races, clans, it doesn't matter whether they are from lower or upper realms he can make them power full with his abilities which other didn't. Like he can use sources, souls, cultivation knowledge, etc of his enemies or those who are dead in fights, clashes, war. Or with some other abilities.Only if it's not possible for other and only my have this ability .(Not his woman's) only his subordinate, slaves, whether they will have some disadvantages like less lifespan or negative effect if they agree. 4- Mc is only increasing strength with dual cultivation but it will be better if he has some adventures between 200 or 300 chapter gap or (get some other inheritance) other than primordial dragon. 5- Mc didn't have any ambitious (like whether he will become Emperor of only this universe or other also). 6- In chapter ( Xia Tian and others) are mentioned I have read other novels I hope they are not same other wise ending will be worse ending. Like ( BTTH, MU, TGR ) 7- I didn't know whether ( novel will end at this universe) or you plan to add other higher and Supreme universe like higher realms and ( Mc will be start his own journey to become powerfull after becoming real primordial dragon and Emperor of this universe ). But second one will be much better. 8- If novel will end at only this universe it has been better if about other universe was revealed when my reach immortal realms in cultivation. (But if Mc will go to higher or Supreme universe then on the contrary it is better. 9- Mc character is still too naive it will be better if got betray or his some information is leaked to grow his character. Mc share everything with his woman's atleast he should hide 1 or 2 important things. 10- In novel angels and demons names are eastern (while humans, beast, devils name are Chinese). For these (2 lower angel and demons realms) names are already written in future please try to only use fully eastern or fully Chinese names for higher realm demons and all other inhabitants. For now Mc name is Chinese so as reader I will recommend using Chinese names only but it's upon you or you can use only Eastern names. 11-( Lastly Tang Xiao about 5 parallel universe formed by him) if it's going to be true then it is worse I hope and request if Author can change it in future. (It can only be Tang Xiao thinking or scheme against Ling Yun or something else story) . But If theory in novel about 5 parallel universe formed like DOCTOR STRANGE and AVENGERS then it is truly worse and ugly. If novel end only in one universe in which Ling Yun is 5 universe can exist from start or they are separated it can be okay. But if Tang Xiao theory of 5 parallel universe is going to be truth at end it useless although ( technology and science is used in novel on lower realm and there is also upper realm) there no point if Ling Yun and his woman, s still are not going to change like cultivator and continue on them it's better to (leave cultivation) and switch science fiction novel. Little involvement like system and new residence and visit to one upper technology realm for few chapters its ok. But to much like using ( his Yu uncle vines and demon realm ruler, blessed realm ruler daughter ). Or there can other higher universe but still I didn't know where novel will end. And it can be Tang Xiao scheme to rule his universe or Tang Xiao can be a part of of hidden race, power, clan that treath universe of future (after all that hidden danger can be anything universe ending, lifespan ending or any other story. Note:- I hope Author will focus on less use of technology or stop using technology (Al left by tang Xiao is enough and it use in future can only be restricted to upper realm not to Supreme realms) because not sure Supreme realm is only one or more (Especially, Parallel Universe theory can be change or false, scheme in future chapters) it can also be like ( lord of no boundary Anime) there are 7 universe and (Valkarine Domination) etc. In these their are also many universe outer, inner, small etc. Whether other things change or not please focus on these 2 things. Not sure how many chapter will you write. Even if you write 5,000 or 10,000 chapter I will read because your novel is good but please try to upload more chapter on daily bases in 8 months there are only 600 chapter reading 1,2,3 chapter daily in annoying if you can't upload 10, 15 chapter daily atleast try to upload 5 or 6 chapters I will read your novels again in November hope there will be many Chapters to read keep working bro. About ratting I want to give 3 star because of my last 3 points I mentioned above in note about (technology, Tang Xiao theaory and chapters) but this novel is really good and I know author is working hard so I will give 4 star . Hope novel will get better especially in these 3 points i will come back and read soon if it get better in these 3 points in future then next time I will give 5 star.
Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System
Eastern · JosieGan