Webnovel Author: jmjackie - Novel Collection

Not bad! Good start, however, I found the multiple changes in POV kind of confusing at first. It might be best for continuity purposes to stick to one POV for example, 3rd person in order to keep it flowing better, but other than that it was quite enjoyable to read, with strong world-building and character backgrounds.

Hilarious! I was laughing from the first few paragraphs. A great start indeed. I never read a story like this before and I can't wait to see where this goes.

Interesting! The premise of a virus outbreak affecting both ecosystems and advanced technologies creates a compelling setting for a sci-fi novel. The author's creation of the Authonoid to combat the virus is an intriguing plot device. An update to further explore the characters' struggles against the outbreak and political unrest would be highly anticipated by readers.

Enjoyable so far! Jiang Yan's fall from grace and the subsequent twist of fate is a compelling premise for a novel. The author's ability to create a character with such power and success only to have it all taken away is impressive. An update to further explore the aftermath of Jiang Yan's betrayal and death would be eagerly awaited by readers.

Good start! This intriguing synopsis of Natasha's transformation from a faithful assistant to a sinister accomplice is ripe with potential for a thrilling and thought-provoking story. The author's ability to create a character with such complexity in such a short description is impressive, and an update to further explore Natasha's motivations and actions would be eagerly anticipated by readers.

Excellent start! I like the concept I feel like the plot is good and very engaging. Perhaps more description when it comes to settings? But overall very good!

Strong introduction and worldbuilding to fantastic characters! You've really taken the time to allow readers to get to know your MCs. I felt that the beginning was very engaging keep up the good work thanks :)

Strong start! Great world-building :) I can't wait to see what happens next with these characters. I found the concept very interesting and the writing intriguing, keep up the good work!

Excellent hook! The story of Ares is a captivating tale of a young man's journey of self-discovery in a world filled with magic and adventure. The author's writing style is engaging, and the plot is well-thought-out, with intriguing twists and turns that keep readers on the edge of their seats. This story has a lot of potential and leaves readers wanting more. Encouraging the author to continue and update the story regularly will surely keep readers eagerly anticipating the next chapter :)

Nice try! But still needs some work... The story of Nova is captivating and filled with suspenseful twists and turns. However, the author's lack of attention to spelling and grammar detracts from the overall experience. Encouraging the author to review and edit their chapters before posting will enhance the quality of the story and make it more enjoyable for readers. A little extra effort in editing can go a long way in creating a polished and professional final product :)