Use one tense. its confusing
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Eastern · Astral_Pandemonium
Harry potter be like
"Alfred, you damn deserter!" He screamed calmly.
Fantasy · XcrapttS
As they walked, Salin mumbled about the task, she looked displeased, and her unkempt hair heightened her displeasure.
Fantasy · XcrapttS
This here is a fact
ch 10 Time is fleeting. Ambitions are eternal
Fantasy · XcrapttS
Yes I totally understand what this means
The workshop could use a makeover. The modular, prefabricated structure looked second hand, as if it was salvaged off a battlefield or scrap yard. With the amount of rust and scratches its exterior sported, it was a miracle it hadn't fallen apart.
Sci-fi · Exlor
This can be replaced with descriptions
The Strongest Conquest System
Eastern · Astral_Pandemonium