Heyooo , I am an author currently working on THE REALM BEYOND THE VEIL it's one of my most focused works and I hope it grabs your fancy, go on and check it out.
2022-11-17 Joined South Africa
That is the question, now isn't it... It's more for clearance sake, wrote it on a whim.
(Author Note: This is not the end of the story... There will be more -_-)
Fantasy · nether550dev
Haha, Yep, he sure did. :D
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Fantasy · nether550dev
Hey there, there's more about the scroll in further chapters, hope you enjoy it. :D
ch 0 1 THE WORLD BEYOND REINCARNATION (Prologue and Ch 1)
Fantasy · nether550dev
remove 'hand' before 'right-hand' accidentally put and extra one.
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Fantasy · 146whitewolf
Each human had one type of element that they were proficient in, they could barely use any of the other elements.
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Fantasy · Aaron_ThunderSteel
3rd sentence. They only received elemental-based powers and nothing like the other species.
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Fantasy · Aaron_ThunderSteel
remove 'power' after combustion 2nd sentence
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Fantasy · Aaron_ThunderSteel
and the kingdom and council of this world formed 80 years of humans gained dominance
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Fantasy · Aaron_ThunderSteel
from 'fairies to griffins'
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Fantasy · Aaron_ThunderSteel
Dwarves 'were' instead of where
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Fantasy · Aaron_ThunderSteel
Thank you :D much appreciated, glad you like it so far :D
ch 0 1 THE WORLD BEYOND REINCARNATION (Prologue and Ch 1)
Fantasy · nether550dev
He might never "know" instead of now in last sentence
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Urban · MJWrites
The story is interesting and draws one in, although the chapters are quite short, it is not to bad. The grammar can be sorted out but overall it is understandable. Good job.
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Video Games · Scarlet_Wolf96