Badges 1
Moments 7
I soon did,
It soon did the four arrows he had shot clamped softly between his jaws.
ASOIAF: The white Dragon
Book&Literature · waryfishy
I like how you keep tension
ch 0 3 It's Time
Attack on Titan: Crimson
Anime & Comics · waryfishy
„tongue“
The boy screamed as he hit its massive slimy tung, the massive teeth closing around him.
Attack on Titan: Crimson
Anime & Comics · waryfishy
I like the description but the „figure“ may need more description. I know I have done this when I have written, because of what I have had in my minds-eye I have failed transfer to the text. If then say freakish features then the reader is unable to grasp what is freakish.
Out of the corner of his eye, he spotted a gigantic dark figure hidden deep in the forest, it was at least 10 metres tall with freakish features.
Attack on Titan: Crimson
Anime & Comics · waryfishy
Thanks. Ver grippingy
ch 12 Tyrion Lannister
ASOIAF: The white Dragon
Book&Literature · waryfishy