till the end idk what beast is this, like is it four-legged or is it similar to a bear or lion or a dinosaur?
ch 0 1 Whatever it takes
Fantasy · _Faizy_
oh nice sato, at least you realize it. this kingdom kind of sus
So much for the "hero" thing. We really must be captives, after all. Is what I thought, but I never had a doubt in my mind that we weren't captives in the first place.
Fantasy · Sir_Killington
kuso jiji me <- somehow i wanna say it :)
The old man's body trembled with excitement at the last listing. "And to answer the third, allow me to ask a question of my own."
Fantasy · Sir_Killington
the description of the characters and the story is good, and the way of writing is easy to read and imaginable by readers. but I can't say anything about the characters, the world, and the development of the story because it's still 1 chapter. this also applies to stability updates.
This book has been deleted.
thank you.
ch 11 Devil Awakening (2)
Fantasy · Alisa_Vitarda
really? wow, that's good then. but I'm more surprised you read till the newest chapter, Arigatou :)
ch 10 Devil Awakening (1)
Fantasy · Alisa_Vitarda
boukensha
"City of adventurers, finally here"
Fantasy · Alisa_Vitarda
thanks for the advice. I will do just that
ch 0 1 Adventurer City Lunalemiere
Fantasy · Alisa_Vitarda
no mana? just use Ki instead
Those who do not have Mana core won't be able to gain Knights aura, won't become a Wizard or or another classes that can use Mana.
Fantasy · Aweeeeee
after reading 10 chapters of your book. as a writer it's good, the plot is also good except for the beast in chapters 2/3 he fights the beast but the description of the beast is not clear. what kind of animal was it, was it four-legged or not, did it look like a dinosaur or some fictitious kind like a chimera? because there was a battle scene I found it hard to imagine the battle because I didn't know what kind of beast it was. other than that, the rest of the story is good, the way description of the characters and the event is also good
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Fantasy · _Faizy_