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Princess What do you think?
ch 60 Chapter 60: Alerting The Other Side
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
Just a suggestion I saw that it was suitable for Lucas' strength and also it is not a whip but an ordinary sword that can be used in close or long range combat through techniques that exploit its sharp split blades that can be moved by power to make Lucas fight different types of opponents, especially those who use physical force or spears.
ch 59 Chapter 59:Witnessing A Different World
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
suggestion Why don't you make Lucas a sword of this kind? I feel that this sword suits him, especially with his brain-moving ability. It would be great to combine SIF techniques with whip skills with the ability to move my mind.
ch 59 Chapter 59:Witnessing A Different World
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
Don't worry you can make it happen . During the arc or after developing his bloodline, make him have something happen to him that makes him question his identity . And that suspicion grows during the following chapters . There is always a solution
ch 55 Chapter 55:Friend, Is It?
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
I had another suggestion, but I feel it's too late for me I wanted you to make Lucas suffer from dissociative identity disorder throughout the seasons because of his dream memories and his identity as Lucas makes him unable to define who he is.
ch 55 Chapter 55:Friend, Is It?
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
What about my suggestion to make the hero's hair white, I think it suits him 🫠 I mean, when his bloodline evolves
ch 55 Chapter 55:Friend, Is It?
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
One of the reasons is the disease that makes a person's hair turn white from the intensity of fear and anxiety, and due to Lucas' frequent nightmares, this will be the first stimulus, and the second stimulus is his strength when a strain develops and his true ability opens. Obvious changes of shape affected by his energy and white energy represents the light that reflects calm
ch 22 Chapter 22:Sparring Session[2]
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
I'll see you after 200 I'll start here by grouping the chapters
ch 16 Chapter 16:Welcoming Ceremony
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
You would imagine if the regressor was Lucas that used his memories of Frederick's case
ch 13 Chapter 13:Unlocking Shop 2
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
I'm sorry, this is what I could do, it may not be good, but my arm broke while I was drawing it on the computer 🥲
ch 13 Chapter 13:Unlocking Shop 2
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
By the way, is there a reason why the hero's eyes are special golden 🧐
ch 12 Chapter 12:Unlocking Shop
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
Sorry I drew it quickly . . How can I imagine Lucas at this moment😂😂
ch 12 Chapter 12:Unlocking Shop
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
I used to read at least 300 chapters a day, so it's hard to read a chapter every day 🥲
ch 11 Chapter 11:Arrival Of Rescuers
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
By the way . I suggest letting Lucas evolve into a person who doesn't care about my other people's lives as long as it's someone I'm not close to, because honestly being kind is a bad thing.
ch 11 Chapter 11:Arrival Of Rescuers
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
They literally merged and both became one. In addition to that they are originally one person whose soul was divided and part of it moved to the earth Simply that neither of them controls the body of the other they are one person who lived two lives
ch 176 Chapter 40.1 - A test
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer