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been *on a date (and moreover) must not be used together.
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Reincarnation of the greatest detective of 21st century
Fantasy · WalktowardtheApple
'i desire a system"
ch 66 Chapter 64 : Game
In the movie worlds with my system
Movies · lucifer_112
bro please read I desire a system
ch 66 Chapter 64 : Game
In the movie worlds with my system
Movies · lucifer_112
bto please read my novel "i desire a system". You used to read it. I have recently updated the chapters.
ch 34 CHAPTER 34 : AFTER ONE YEAR
In the movie worlds with my system
Movies · lucifer_112
nice i liked it, your writing keeps on improving.
ch 0 6 Swords Feel Different When In Dreams 1
The Book is dropped
Fantasy · KexoHD
*3 person
On my way, I thought why there was a 3 people room system because I didn't want any roommates or stuff like that but I just accepted it regardless. Slithering my arm in my hair and seeing how it has already started growing again made my arms itch because it was a fresh cut I expected to stay in shape for at least a week but it seems like that isn't the case.
The Book is dropped
Fantasy · KexoHD
*weird
It could hardly be called a train with how stretchy it was, and the weirder fact is you can't even feel any change in the train thanks to chunks of metal covering it. Yes, you get those occasional shakes but other than that it is pretty smooth and chill.
The Book is dropped
Fantasy · KexoHD
*laid on one of the chapter was good
I laid down in one of the 5 seats like it was a bed, dropping my phone in my head while I was trying to find a movie.
The Book is dropped
Fantasy · KexoHD
comma after down
I dropped my hands down my eyes starting to shine, what have I done? Even though I had no idea what was wrong I realized it was something that happened because of me.
The Book is dropped
Fantasy · KexoHD
your writinng really improved, you are making proper use of puntuation
It was almost like a new rock was being added each time, Ren's father always comes back late even though he's extremely loyal to my mom. Because thanks to his work he has a lot of trips but since the pay is good he can't say no.
The Book is dropped
Fantasy · KexoHD
a comma must be plalced after complicated
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Fantasy · KexoHD
again too long sentence with a lot of thing going on. try to break it in 2 sentence.
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Fantasy · KexoHD
away from home is not necessary , it can be omitted
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Fantasy · KexoHD
the sentence is too long. generally readers might get confused. so try to brea it into 2 or 3 sentences.
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Fantasy · KexoHD
Sir, I have been writing a novel named "I desire a system". I would be very thankful to you if you could read it and give me a review. I am trying really hard but not getting much views, your smallest support can really help me improve. Thankyou.
ch 1462 Eternal Glory (END)
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Fantasy · Elyon
don't worry sir i will be back , I have suffering from some serious issue for the past few months. Thus i stopped writing, But i will continue writing it. Hope to get you support
Milf World And System
Fantasy · Prasen_Syndrome