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So far so good, the author has done his research pretty well... The naminga of people are a bit awkward. But that's for me and story is kind of slow paced, but i love it. Expecting to see a wondeful struggles of the cave man.

Thorough explanation on scenes and the story narration is pretty good! Character introduction is the best so far, with a good amount of emotions in each character, including the gods. Especially the color divison of souls....I'm kinda hooked with the detailed description of these parts. And the cons are author needs to work on his grammar wise, that's it. This book has a very good concept, that brings back some memories...Hope veryone give it a try. Note: Book is still in early stage... I will update my review later

A very good novel to those that want an action novel! We need more chapters author. So far enjoying the reads, quality wise is also pretty good[img=update][img=update]!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not bad writing quality and an interesting set up. Good character development, even though author can still work on this section. Update stability is pretty good too. Pretty good so far, I will update my review again. (Don't take offense, my review looks a bit dumb).