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TheErraticRaccoon
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Many thanks!
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Harry Potter: The Magic of Vengeance
Book&Literature · TheErraticRaccoon
In re-reading the previous few chapters in concession, I can see that I rely a lot on facial expressions for emotion. I know why I did this, for the face is the most emotive, but I am going to actively try and include more body language in future. Just thought I'd be transparent with my plans. Have a good one!
ch 10 Chapter Ten: Sand In The Shoe
Harry Potter: The Magic of Vengeance
Book&Literature · TheErraticRaccoon
Oh dear visual readers, rejoice! This is the image I took reference to while I wrote about the wand. For reading pleasure, you can imagine this exact image as his wand. [img=recommend]
Soleil carefully raised the wooden lid with trembling hands, and let his eyes rest on the blackened wand that sat dormant within the container. It was far longer than he would've thought, and far straighter than he'd have ever expected. It almost looked like a rod of graphite, only curving inwards at one end to form a pronounced grip, and thinning at the other end to taper down to the tip. Deep flower-like ridges sat both above and below the handle, making it look both unique and expensive.
Harry Potter: The Magic of Vengeance
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Thank you very much!
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Book&Literature · TheErraticRaccoon
Many thanks, hadn't realised this as I could only recall Harry's usage. Have since changed, many thanks for the help!
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Many thanks for pointing that out!
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Changed, thank you for pointing that out for me!
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In addition to my other comment, please picture the marking, in much the same design, extending down to the hand. Hope this helps.
To Soleil, it looked to be wholly comprised of circles and lines, that were bound and arranged to look like an illustrated runic magic circle. The luminous red faded after a few moments, leaving nothing but a scar of its previous formation. Soleil felt the panic ensue after the event had ended.
Harry Potter: The Magic of Vengeance
Book&Literature · TheErraticRaccoon
For my beautiful visual readers, I pictured this image as I wrote the description for the marking. I believe it is Fullmetal Alchemist-inspired, but I could be wrong entirely. I've had it saved in a portfolio of potential tattoos for months. Enjoy.
To Soleil, it looked to be wholly comprised of circles and lines, that were bound and arranged to look like an illustrated runic magic circle. The luminous red faded after a few moments, leaving nothing but a scar of its previous formation. Soleil felt the panic ensue after the event had ended.
Harry Potter: The Magic of Vengeance
Book&Literature · TheErraticRaccoon
This is meant to be commented on the title above, but it wouldn't let me. I'm debating adding actual, descriptive chapter titles. If this is something you'd like to see, let me know. Suggests for previous chapters would be appreciated. Many thanks,
September 2nd, 1989 (The Same Day)
Harry Potter: The Magic of Vengeance
Book&Literature · TheErraticRaccoon
For any wondering, it's this bad boy right here. One of my favourite creatures from Fantastic Beasts. Doesn't he just look so friendly?
Fredrick knew immediately, that it was a Zouwu. Though far smaller than he'd ever known them to be recorded. He knew of them from books and encyclopedias that he read in a time long past. It was a creature native to China, but more importantly, it was supposed to be extinct.
Harry Potter: The Magic of Vengeance
Book&Literature · TheErraticRaccoon
There is but only one answer. He who understands, cares and wouldn’t, couldn’t, ever tell anyone else your deepest secrets. I present to you;
A Wizard's Solitude
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