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applo43
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if u see this in outside perspective sum of you realised that the green hair girl (Kaede) is essentially undermining the trust our MC put in her....... ' I'm doing everything for you ' it might sounds sweet but it essential means that you can't do anything by yourself that's why I am doing this for you.
ch 71 Chapter 70: "Everything for you"
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
man, I just read 15 chap and exit the WN and got the chap notification it's like Cherry on top
ch 17 C16 - The third entry! Luke defeated in three moves?!
My diary system in Marvel
Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
Can't wait to see what happened and keep it up it's going well and we all like it
ch 11 C10 - Daily life as a Cafe owner.
My diary system in Marvel
Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
I think you nailed it!
First of all, I would like to say that this entire chapter has been completely re-worked from the original MTL. The direction and story writing in the MTL was so plain, boring, and full of gaps. So much so that I decided to use the general template of the MTL chapter and write my own. And if you've read the entirety of the chapter, you will know that I decided to include a certain family in my chapter and the reason why is because I had wanted to flesh out the background story of Luke and give him additional character depth. I used the Parkers because I wanted to keep myself open to any future possibilities :D Besides, this whole thing is an AU isn't it fufu. But then again, I may end up not using the Parkers as much in this translation since I don't quite know how they would be written in future chapters by the original author. I'm just an editor trying to make this story a more enjoyable read. I also attempted to establish a connection with Wanda in a more realistic way. The original MTL was just "hehe this is my wife, I love my wife, she is my wife." And Wanda being like "Who is your wife?! Ba- Baka *blush blush*". Please let me know how I did with this chapter, especially those who have read the original MTL. Do you prefer if I keep going with the direction that I'm going, or do you prefer that I stick to the original MTL direction, Let me know please!
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Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
Thank you for your sacrifice brother
Editor's note 1: In the MTL and many other copy paste 'translator' versions (I '…' translator because let's face it, all these people are just copy pasting the MTL with minor and infrequent edits here and there), I see many comparisons about S.H.I.E.L.D and something called SPEAR (???). I found out that SPEAR is actually like a Chinese version of SHIELD in Earth-616. Huh, you learn something new every day. Anyways, since this whole setting is in the MCU, it felt weird to have that sudden out-of-pocket comparison between SHIELD and SPEAR and also the whole MC being a part of SPEAR. So, I just removed it entirely and added my own two cents of how I think this scene in particular should have played out. Like I mean there was a long ass saga in the original MTL about how it would be hard to find Luke and blah blah Chinese idioms and blah blah. Hope I at least made it bearable for the general audience out there! And if I have, maybe can I get some cookies! This Takodachi needs his daily dose of WAH!
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Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
why not?
What did you think? I think I should add the "slice of life" tag to this; I know there are many great events in "Invincible," but most of them can be avoided by doing X or Y thing. I don't want to simply repeat the canon. At the same time, I don't want an empty story that just goes from major Event A to major Event B.
Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
bro, what happened to your ' Tycoon Actor in Hollywood ' ff
ch 30 Small Business and Deborah's unexpected offer
Godfather System
Movies · NewComer714
she*
I was chatting with Komi-San, strangely he was much more accessible than the day before.
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
I can't refuse if she does that.*
Damn, that's not fair! I can't refuse if he does that.
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
her fist with her palm and said.*
Then she hit his fist with her palm and said.
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
Did you understand*
Otori: "Listen Yamai-San… because your parents and mine worked together before I will let this matter go just this once… But mess with Tadano-Kun again… And you will cease to exist by the end of the week… I Did you understand?" The girl's tone was cold and hostile, her deep and penetrating pair of emerald eyes made anyone who stared at them feel a chill.
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
She took Yadano's hands and shook them as she nodded.*
She took her Yadano hands and shook them as she nodded.
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If she had made it appear, she was practicing to be as good as her friend at this kind of thing. She had not yet reached the Doraemon level that her friend had but she would one day.*
If she had made him appear, she was practicing to be as good as her friend at this kind of thing. She had not yet reached the Doraemon level that her friend had but she would one day.
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
bro keep me as your editor for free so I can fix the mistakes 😂😂😂
With renewed determination Komi looked at the blade.
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biting her nails in frustration as she saw how Komi and Tadano were becoming close again.*
The figure was Yamai who was biting his nails in frustration as he saw how Komi and Tadano were becoming close again.
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
she exhaled.*
She expelled all of her panic and negative emotions into the turbulent air he exhaled.
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Anime & Comics · Nashi103
ch 610 SWAGs
Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
Sci-fi · Agent_047