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No it's not giving up but it's slow for updates

The story is not bad but it is not good either the beginning was good and remained coherent whether in relation to the behavior of the MC but the story started to deteriorate from the moment you skip a fucking year where he learns to be an animagus and the release of Sirius from that moment the story no longer makes sense already starting with the fact that the relationships he has for example with Susan and Hanna who have disappeared then there is the relationship between the MC and Harry at the beginning he had no resentment but from the 4th year the MC despises him and you don't know why there is also the behavior his behavior with Sirius the MC literally says that he will not trust him then after they have a father son relationship another weird thing about it is that he doesn't trust Sirius because he doesn't want to marry a stranger already we're talking about Sirius the pure blood who doesn't care about that but the PC doesn't trust him because he doesn't want it to be Harry who becomes the heir why is he worried about that wealth he doesn't care about creating a metal with alchemy in addition being the heir prevents him from becoming better in magic and then there is the behavior of the MC he was put in Ravenclaw but throughout the story he behaves like a Slytherin

Nothing is certain but it is possible that there is a harem

So here I may have found one of the worst Harry Potter fanfictions of all possible fanfictions seriously the story is so slow that they make old age look like a fighter plane seriously it took 50 chapters to get through the first week at Hogwarts only the first week then comes the fact that the MC becomes a cheater because why not promises that he would do techniques like avatar and Naruto (spoiler alert we haven't heard about it anymore I'm at chapter 120 for info) then there are the chapters which are useless already that the story is not interesting there are literally the 50 or even 70 first chapters which are useless then there are the relationships between characters are disastrous I mean you introduced Daphne and Tracey then they disappear you Malfoy who pisses off everyone but he does nothing to the MC despite the fact that he is a muggle born there is also the fact that the MC does not want to interact with the trio just why in any case it is inevitable you also changed the place where the troll was supposed to be, you put it in the bathroom where the chamber of secrets is located, why was it used for what? especially since after that there are no more butterfly events and then to end the inconsistencies such as the fact that the MC can raise 440 lbs even though he is a child, how can he lift this kind of weight without his family noticing and even how he can experience magic without any of his parents or neighbors noticing? there is also the fact that the MC said that he didn't care about the points because all he brings is just flags in the color of his house at the end of the year but 100 chapters later he says "well if the teachers want to show favoritism then I will actively participate in the competition even if I know very well that I gain nothing from it" and then there is the moment when he confronts Quirell in the Forbidden Forest why why he does that and then of course comes the moment where you say that the rituals that Voldemort did to HIS BODY also affect Quirell there it's just stupid the body rituals only affect the body of the person performing the ritual it's just ridiculous To put it simply the story is mediocre past your path it's better for you if I could give 0 I would have done so

Le début est vraiment pas ouf mais le développement de l'histoire est vraiment bien mais il y à quelques points négatifs notamment sur les relations amoureuses on passe de Daphné à tonks à fleur pour revenir à Daphné d'autant plus que arrêter la relation avec fleur avec comme cause la tromperie avec tonks est nul les deux savent qu'elle est en couple mais pas grave aller on le fait d'autant plus que la discussion entre fleur et Harry est très stérile, les combats sont pas assez extraordinaire dans le sens qu'avec la magie on peut faire énormément de choses mais là c'est très limité ce qui est dommage et enfin le côté transmigration qui disparaît dans l'histoire et la relation avec perenelle je sais pas quoi tu apprends que ta grand mère savait la merde que tu subissait et n'a rien fait purement par orgueil et te parle avec condescendance et pourtant tu lui balance pas le meilleur crochet du droit de ta vie bref sinon l'histoire est vraiment sympa j'ai bien aimé

The story is not interesting and it is VERY long its been 1 year since the author is still in the 1st year so we will reach 400 chapters but we will only be halfway through the 3rd year

C'est une histoire qui à un début difficile selon mon point de vue mais qui à une très bonne intrigue sa suit à la fois le canon de la série tous en modifiant certains événements en conclusion l'histoire est bonne