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You are absolutely right, I am trying to be better. The MC is really not acting like he is in a marvel universe. This is my first time writing any coherent story, and I need to give all characters depth and relevance. Hydra would come at a threat every chance they get, and shield personnel wouldn’t take the word of kid. Thank you for your input I will use your suggestions to make a better story. Thank you and have a goo day.
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Thank you and honestly I have been writing the chapters and coming up with how I would like the story to develop as I write each individual chapter. I am trying to make a better foundation and give readers longer chapters that I filled with more depth.
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Thank you
If the story is bad and you find it not very interesting. I'll just give a generic answer that this is my first story ever. That's why I started with a fan-fic. Thanks and if you are reading this have a good day.
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You are right I am trying to make the story a little more weighty and not rely on pure might. Thanos is a cuniving being I would like for him to weave a web that almost dooms the Mc. Something to push him past his limits.
When I stop talking he starts to speak himself, "I know about Thanos plans boy, you are not giving me a good reason. Why you are not on earth right now planning for the safety of your world." As soon as he says his peace, I cut straight to the point as not to anger the king of the gods. "King Odin I have a plan to confront Thanos army after your son opens a portal for the chitauri armies to come through I'll head through that portal alone to confront them." I pause to let that sink into the king's mind and then I continue. "After I decimate the chitauri fleets and space station. I'll take the fight to Thanos himself, I won't confront him at first I'll attack his supply lines and any worlds that are under is control. I'll destroy every asset he has in the universe leaving him for last. I know Thanos is strong, one of the strongest warriors in the universe."
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True I am tryng to get better the Mc needs more life a better sense of purpose. That is what I am trying to instill in chapters 29 and beyond. Thank you for reading I know it’s just a way to pass the time. You have a great day
ch 12 Chapter 10
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True a lot of humans are ten times worse then most aliens. As he goes through more battles he will probably change.
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
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He wil kill aliens just not the humans of earth. It’s a little weird I know
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
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2012 some times I forget to add a concrete timeline. My bad this is my first ever writing and an actual story. So if it not very exciting, I’l try to get better.
From that day on, I dive into my studies, my training, with a new focus. Knowledge becomes my weapon, control becomes my goal. I won't let my powers control me, won't let them hurt others. And as I grow wiser, I understand that being a hero isn't just about powers or punching bad guys. It's about choices, about knowing when to act and when to hold back.
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My bad
His enhanced hearing caught snippets of Thor's interactions with Jane Foster, Erik Selvig, and Darcy Gray, revealing the god of thunder's growing connection to humanity. However, Vega knew that Thor's lesson had yet to fully sink in, his arrogance and impulsiveness still at play.
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Thanks man
I hope to finish the next chapter later today.
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