I see I will check that out, ty [img=recommend]
His death was something out of a fever dream. Foreign to remember but arguably true in a sense.
Fantasy · Sinbau
Yeah I agree I think I’m lacking when it comes to world building do you got any novels to recommend for it I wanna fix my newbie writer habits
His death was something out of a fever dream. Foreign to remember but arguably true in a sense.
Fantasy · Sinbau
Haha pretty much it’s Polish for New Life
Nowe Życie
Fantasy · Sinbau
I totally forgot abt that lol the lack of sleep getting to me
He felt like he was being drowned in a large wave.
Fantasy · Sinbau
I’ll try to fix that but thank you for the review
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Coraline Jones Vs. Coraline Hugues haha
Whoa long review [img=gift][img=coins] tysm [img=recommend]
With a stone raised, she clenched her jaw and threw the first one at the head of the boy who was holding Coraline's hands tightly together.
Urban · Sinbau
It’s the prolgue bc it’s a time farther into the novel but ig I could change it as I continue writing
Coraline let out a small chuckle while grazing the side of Irene's cheek, playing with her hair in symphony as Irene's warmth tickled at her. Her green eye's longingly stared back at her.
Urban · Sinbau
Fixed ty [img=recommend]
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Urban · Sinbau
Long chp author I say make a pt.2 for it
ch 0 7 MY COUSINS PEER-PRESSURE ME INTO GOING TO SCHOOL
Urban · AuHNG
“What do u think of the name Zero Dreams, honey?” …“Great idea!”
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Urban · AuHNG
Good start only complaint is split long paragraphs [img=recommend]
ch 0 1 I BECOME THE SECURITY GUARD’S LATE-NIGHT SNACK
Urban · AuHNG
Ngl I’ve thought about this comment for a month now. So when making the newest chp I had your words in mind and try to redirect it as constructive criticism. I am a first time author so I may not be able to convey pacing all that well but rest assured there is a plan lol. And regardless thank you for taking the time to read my work that means a lot, thank you [img=Smitten]
The Divinity's Curse
Fantasy · Sinbau