- 0 d Continuous Writing
- 18.9 h of Reading
- 314 Read books
Sinbau
female LV 12dw guys I'm stockpiling
2022-12-19 Joined GlobalBadges 6
Moments 600
I see I will check that out, ty [img=recommend]
His death was something out of a fever dream. Foreign to remember but arguably true in a sense.
The Divinity's Curse
Fantasy · Sinbau
Yeah I agree I think I’m lacking when it comes to world building do you got any novels to recommend for it I wanna fix my newbie writer habits
His death was something out of a fever dream. Foreign to remember but arguably true in a sense.
The Divinity's Curse
Fantasy · Sinbau
Haha pretty much it’s Polish for New Life
Nowe Życie
The Divinity's Curse
Fantasy · Sinbau
I totally forgot abt that lol the lack of sleep getting to me
He felt like he was being drowned in a large wave.
The Divinity's Curse
Fantasy · Sinbau
I’ll try to fix that but thank you for the review
Thank you! [img=strong][img=coins]
Coraline Jones Vs. Coraline Hugues haha
Whoa long review [img=gift][img=coins] tysm [img=recommend]
With a stone raised, she clenched her jaw and threw the first one at the head of the boy who was holding Coraline's hands tightly together.
Pomegranates For Dinner
Urban · Sinbau
It’s the prolgue bc it’s a time farther into the novel but ig I could change it as I continue writing
Coraline let out a small chuckle while grazing the side of Irene's cheek, playing with her hair in symphony as Irene's warmth tickled at her. Her green eye's longingly stared back at her.
Pomegranates For Dinner
Urban · Sinbau
Fixed ty [img=recommend]
This paragraph has been deleted.
Pomegranates For Dinner
Urban · Sinbau
Long chp author I say make a pt.2 for it
ch 0 7 MY COUSINS PEER-PRESSURE ME INTO GOING TO SCHOOL
NPC Website
Urban · AuHNG
“What do u think of the name Zero Dreams, honey?” …“Great idea!”
This paragraph has been deleted.
NPC Website
Urban · AuHNG
Good start only complaint is split long paragraphs [img=recommend]
ch 0 1 I BECOME THE SECURITY GUARD’S LATE-NIGHT SNACK
NPC Website
Urban · AuHNG
Ngl I’ve thought about this comment for a month now. So when making the newest chp I had your words in mind and try to redirect it as constructive criticism. I am a first time author so I may not be able to convey pacing all that well but rest assured there is a plan lol. And regardless thank you for taking the time to read my work that means a lot, thank you [img=Smitten]
The Divinity's Curse
Fantasy · Sinbau