Moments 5
As he imagined it, the bone that had come out of his body changed. Just as he was imagining, the bone started condensing and one side suddenly became very thin, and very sharp.
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A bit too straightforward I would say, but hey, why not
"Miss Conti, I want you." Carl's sudden proclamation made Isabella blush as she turned to face him and stared at him with her eyes narrowed. She was incredibly pissed off at this moment.
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I second this, I've read all of the 34 chaps, and I have to admit, the story is growing on me, the characters and all, but the first person POV is a bit weird, this chapter immediately got my attention in a better way, I also do think most people are used to the third person POV
( AN: Hey you guys, so I wrote this chapter in the third person, I'm honestly debating whether or not to actually change the writing style and write entirely in the third person right now, I'm writing my other two novels like that, so I don't know if that would be better for the overall quality of this one, do give me your thoughts about it! )
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It was a green wind, one easily noticeable as if it was gas, not wind.
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