Vanquishing the heaven and creating my own world of cultivation. Wanna be a part of riding the heavenly deity and demon lords into the deepest abyss depravity. Choose ye this day?
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ch 0 1 WHAT IS IT?
Fantasy · DaoistHolySwitch
just try to give ya comment on this after reading
ch 0 3 Venturing into the cave
Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
thanks bri
Duamu Shan Yu also known as Shang Gu a name given to him by parent.
Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
The main show is about to begin
ch 0 2 Summoning
Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
Love the start but a small correction of punctuation marks are needed
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Fantasy · Darkness_Descends
You really have a sense of humor
Yea
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Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
Dont get u
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Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
Elder Lin his teacher
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Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
fine, working on that
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Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
thanks bri
Amazing stories but u have to work on your synopsis and give a better story development, Setting is good but a lot are required to be done as you continue writing. Wish you well Young Ms expect to see more from you as we continue reading and pinpointing where you need improvement.
The Unbeatable Kingdom
History · Mia_625