My World Anew

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Dontlookdown

The blend of divinity, games, and evolution make for an interesting concept. The destitute situation that Timeless is in adds a sense of relatability to his character. I look forward to reading more of this work!

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Darkness_Descends

Author here, not trying to be biased, but I rate my work very highly. Yes there might be some grammatical errors, but never something wrong with the storyline, everytime you read and get to a place where you get the "huh" moment, do not fret everything will be weaved together in the end. [img=recommend][img=recommend] Also English isn't my strong suite so sorry about that my editor will be fixing any error I make as we go. Do have patience with me.

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MiaSilver

Ok this is going to be a long one (everything said henceforth is based on an author's and reader's perspective) positives 1) the concepts in the introductory are quite intriguing and sets the world visual. it is clear that there is a distinct history and hopefully more details are explored about it later . 2)the MC fits the perfect standard of wn MC's with the design of his character and will therefore potentially be quite likable or disliked at times but certainly their is much room for his growth and I am quite interested to see how the author will craft him along the way . 3) the quality of writing is above average although a few grammatical errors but it does not disrupt the telling and plot of the story too much. from the writing style, the author is well versed in narrative . 4)The characters are not one dimensional and have depth to them, being distinguished from each other without an overlap in personalities negatives 1) Wn standards in writing style usually encourages short paragraphs that are not too wordy. Long paragraphs may appear as walls of text that encourage readers to often skip them or skim briefly through them so I'd suggest breaking up the long paragraphs . 2) The novel seems to be quite dominated by a narrative style which may potentially lack the element to keep readers fully engaged. 3) the first chapter was not your usual striking Webnovel novel openings, it seems to dump a bit too much of info despite its interesting concepts . 4)the scene transitioning can use some work but as the author said it is not edited so that can be fixed later. but just to point out that the flow of scenes seem detached from each other. ~best of luck to the author and I do believe this novel has a lot of potential to reach greater heights if the small bits are improved

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Kita8944

The novel has a good pace, and as the synopsis says, the novel is gonna blow your mind. The way author has described everything in this story is amazing. It's a good book to start!!

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Ijeoma_Okoroafor

This novel is indeed one of the best novel I’ve read in my lifetime ,I think we need more of this …. I just finished reading chapter 20 and it seems I can’t stop reading it over and over again Please sir/ma keep the good work

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Justin_Gabventure

From the name of this book, you will know that this book is made to have a good and interesting plot. I like the book, so therefore I highly recommend it to any one looking for something unique

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DaoistHolySwitch

Keep your good works. The writing is impressive but you need a lot of improvement in some areas, hope to see that soon and all the best bri

A good novel, kinda reminds me of supergene but a bit different. It’s rare to find books of such quality but this one has great prospect and I hope I can this book goes far

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SamirVanterpool

I love the premise of this story. They way you blended together certain topic is very unique and interesting. You put a twist on things I haven’t seen before.

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DaoistHolySwitch

Love the start. Bri super amazing but u need to gather, your plot well and give a captivating stuff to we readers. Just keep on writing and dm me to make comment on all ya chapters

Wow this is a good concept, looking forward to more update from you. Games, beast, evolution and divinity just my type of novel to be honest.

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MisterEnd

The story was magnificent. It wants me to keep reading it, like some sort of a fantasy dream. The writing quality was great, the World Background was superb, and the story development is steadily unmatched unlike any other typical fantasy stories. Hope you keep writing king!

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Ijeoma_Okoroafor

I’m really satisfied with the novel ,you are so creative , please we need more of this from you .. It’s indeed a decent one and I’ll be giving you a 5 star .. keep the good work

Here to show my support to a friend, but although the rating might seem biased I do read it and I liked it so far. It is indeed unique from most of the novels I’ve been reading

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Grace_Madu_1899

A very interesting novel since it's his or her first time also I'll give him 5 stars...it's been decent so far and I like the name Timeless quite well hope you keep pushing and don't quit I've seen many writers quit early on its such a shame I have high hopes for this novel

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Unknown_Supreme26

First Sunless( My Shadow Slave) and now it's Timeless. What next? Moneyless? (Btw reading it because the name got my attention, I hope it's good!)

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Mia_625

The novel is interesting, if you wanna find a good book then this is just one of the best systems.Look no more🤗

A very good novel I’ll rate it 9/10 due to some minor errors but it’s an enjoyable read, each chapters makes me want to find out what happens in the next lol

I’ve read many novels but you see this one 😌, it’s the best I’ve ever read ❤️ The author deserves a very good award 🥇. Chapter 18 says a lot. I appreciate your good work dear. May God empower you the more Nd grant you more knowledge and wisdom ❤️

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KleanRevel

It's amazing! I love the concept and the way of words. The setting was clear and very imaginative. It's just that when I try to read it out loud, I'm having problems with where to pause because I attempted to read it poetically. But the problem was solely mine.