Ghostz

1yr

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boring chapters aren't all that bad they we'd get bored of all the action without them it's part of a good story

ch 0 6 Chapter 6 (edited)

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1yr

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R.I.P to anyone without pokemon knowledge theyre screwed

ch 0 3 Chapter 3 (edited)

Fantasy · BeginnerReader

1yr

Commented

Best chapter so far in my opinion day 1 and everythings already crazy

ch 0 5 Chapter 5

Fantasy · BeginnerReader

1yr

Posted

combining pokemon with the real world sounds like a really cool concept can't wait to see how the story goes.

Fantasy · BeginnerReader

1yr

Commented

good stuff I think it would be cool if Gavin comes back later as a more challenging opponent for the MC and the cliffhanger was nice

ch 0 4 Chapter 4

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