I really like the premise, ninjas are rarely the focus of webnovels and i love the system, its done well and doesnt feel too bland.
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Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated :)
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got it, I've dropped this complex style of writing around chapter 10
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It must be because the text is in itallics, in this case it says BAM. If you're on mobile you should try updating your app. I hope that helps. Thank you for reading ;)
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I love the descriptions and the story is intriguing, I'd just say be careful not to overload the reader with too much info too early; other than that I enjoyed reading.
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I really like the psychological aspect behind it, after every chapter I'm left with something to contemplate or think about, especially chapter one. This is really good.
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This sounds terrifying.
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Fantasy · Adrian_Jeremy
It'll be explained in later chapters. But All I can say for now is he hates all the other Deities. :)