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"Brother Akira! Wake up! Wake up!" Accompanied by a crisp voice, Akiras door was opened, and a beautiful little girl opened the door and poked in a small head.
Strongest Talent in Naruto
Anime & Comics · Skykritze
Exactamente. Como dice un comentario más abajo, los jutsus no se clasifican por consumo de chakra sino por complejidad de la manipulacion de la forma y la naturaleza.... Cuanta ignorancia, lo más vergonzoso es que este autor pone esas barbaridades en la boca del sabio de los 6 caminos, cuanto cringe da esto, dios
The sage of the six path smiled mysteriously: "Don't underestimate this c-rank ninjutsu. This c-rank ninjutsu was developed by myself in the past. Although it is only c-rank, it is as powerful as any b-rank ninjutsu. The chakra consumption is also the same as c-rank ninjutsu, hence it is classified as a c-rank ninjutsu."
Strongest Talent in Naruto
Anime & Comics · Skykritze
Efectivamente, un niño. ¿Como puede tener talento esta cosa? ¿Que clase de vida vivio antes para comportarse tan tontamente? Autor novato.
"C-rank ninjutsu, old man, are you kidding me?" Akira is very dissatisfied, he can also use c-rank ninjutsu. Isn't the fireball jutsu a c-rank ninjutsu?
Strongest Talent in Naruto
Anime & Comics · Skykritze
Parece un niño. Es como Naruto. Si Naruto hubiera encontrado el anillo, probablemente se comportaria mas maduro que él. En fin, su comportamiento tiene tantos defectos que no se ni por donde comenzar
"Sensei, as your student, can you teach me some powerful ninjutsu?" Akira ask his sensei passionately.
Strongest Talent in Naruto
Anime & Comics · Skykritze
Al menos tiene la conciencia para escoger a una de las mejores waifus de pre Naruto, Mikoto, la otra es por supuesto, Kushina. No me sorprende que sean madres de los dos protas. Con esa frase parece que Mikoto está en la bolsa... A ver que hace con Kushina...
By the way some information about Akira's life background: Shortly after he was born, both of his parents went to the battlefield and both died in an accident. Akira is then adopted by his uncle, whose name is Fukai Uchiha. His uncle's son is Fugaku Uchiha, a few years older than Akira, and has a good relationship with him. There is also a cute little cousin named Uchiha Mikoto. She is a very lively little loli, who likes to follow Akira around…
Strongest Talent in Naruto
Anime & Comics · Skykritze
Cual es el problema de estas personas? siempre finjen ser forzados
"Old man, don't talk about those useless things, I'm only seven years old now, I will sue you for child labor!" Akira said angrily.
Strongest Talent in Naruto
Anime & Comics · Skykritze
Pff, cualquier persona que piense eligiria el momento en que kaguya llegue a la tierra. Incluso puedo entender a quienes eligen el momento en que empieza Naruto.
Some might ask, "why the era of the 'sage of six paths'?". The answer is simple. I want to have a front-seat view of the history of this world without any plot holes and stuff like that. Though it suddenly dawned on me that I didn't specify the time during his era. I don't want to be born during his childhood as that will be a hassle. Not to mention his mother the 'Rabbit Goddess', there will be no chakra to go around. Sigh, what a pain. I just hope I'm around, during a favorable time.
Naruto: Back in Ancient Times
Anime & Comics · Josh_Richie
Kakashi turned towards Sasuke and Sakura and said "The stone contains the name of many of my close friends who were K.I.A".
Naruto is Reincarnated
Anime & Comics · Indie131998
Sakura: ¿más tarde está bien?
"Not now Sakura, we have to grab the bells….."
Naruto is Reincarnated
Anime & Comics · Indie131998
No son las habilidades más creativas pero cumplen su función. De hecho, todo este ff es... como decirlo... ajustado, cliché, family friendly, muy neutral sin ofender a nadie o disgustar a nadie, ocupa lo bueno y utilizado para asegurar que el ff sirva. Admiro al autor por poder crear esto, pero si le sumamos que una parte significativa del ff es de pago... solo queda un ff que fue creado con el solo hecho de vender, lo cual es un poco decepcionante. Pero lo entiendo, fue el objetivo del autor todo el tiempo, al menos hay algo, si el autor no quisiera este ff no existiría.
Dragon-Tiger Breathing Seventh Form, Azure Dragon Descends!
Animeverse Slayer!
Others · DreAm_b0At
A beautiful woman wearing a butterfly hairpin asked.
Animeverse Slayer!
Others · DreAm_b0At
Buena pregunta XD. Y fue contra un simple demonio en eso.
He could vaguely remember his father saying something about this but he couldn't remember what it was. With no answer to this question he pushed it to the back of his mind and rested for a while.
Animeverse Slayer!
Others · DreAm_b0At
Bueno... eso explica muchas cosas. Hay algunas partes que deben ser descritas lo suficientemente detalladas, hasta el momento está bien, no hubo nada tan apremiante, pero si incluyes romance, batallas, filosofía o algo de esa importancia es necesario los detalles, o tu historia está condenada a ser de segunda categoría. Pero bueno, algo es algo, si no puedes está bien, webnovel no requiere tanto nivel, ya es bueno que hagas historias de segunda categoría.
After that, I went to spar with Rengoku (A/n be good with me here I'm not good at describing anything including fights)
Reincarnated in demon slayer as a uchiha.
Anime & Comics · Ppp_Pppp
Espero que tenga un hermano pequeño que haga justicia y más lol. La verdad si el MC es negro, blanco, celeste no me importa mucho. Mientras no sea estúpido, las mujeres no lo engañen o tenga un fierro corto.
One of the reasons the mc is black more like light skin, the reasons is simple, ancestor, the sun that is all I'm willing to say or just wait till you arrive at chapter 33title name ancestor.
Reincarnated in demon slayer as a uchiha.
Anime & Comics · Ppp_Pppp
Nice. Thx.
Lol. Esta historia es bastante predecible... pero de momento va bien.
"Velian, I need you to take my child under your care, She is not stillborn and I need you to enter my lair and take the egg and keep it with you until it's born," She said anxiously
True King's Ecstasy
Fantasy · ElectricLuna
anciano npc promedio del mundo de cultivo...
"Uh, don't be too happy, it is considered half successful" The sage of the six path was a little depressed. He originally planned to wait for the smelly brat to fail in the release of his ninjutsu and after he failed, he will just his use his prepared excuses to educate him, but he obviously couldn't use it now.
Strongest Talent in Naruto
Anime & Comics · Skykritze