I'm posting on Royal Road, Scribble Hub, and Honeyfeed as alternatives.
ch 0 2 The Worst Book Transmigration - 2
Fantasy · RyujiSakamata
I don't have socials yet, but I'm posting weekly. I'm still focusing on my other story so I can't continue this series yet, but I already plotted half of all character backgrounds.
ch 0 2 The Worst Book Transmigration - 2
Fantasy · RyujiSakamata
Thank you for being so helpful in hunting down the present tense in my work. You saved much of my time searching for those. By the way, may I ask if you have further readings or articles about the tenses of verbs in creative writing? I would like to study further about proofreading and further improve my and others' work too.
ch 0 1 The Worst Book in the Bookstore
Fantasy · RyujiSakamata
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"...Estimated Time: 24 days, 7 hours, 32 minutes, 28 seconds..."
Fantasy · UelUel
the pacing here is too rushed
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War · TsukasaFrier
It feels like I've been reading a fresh-out Western book from the bookstore. The details of the world and the character are completely detailed, accompanied with flowery words. As per experience in this platform, readers including I had a hard time reading long paragraphs. Overall, the quality has a great potential and is recommended for Western story lovers.
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No problem, fellow author. I'm also willing to help you maintain clarity on your work if you have some questions. Just contact me at dc.
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yep, tenses aren't my thing. Thank you for pointing this out.
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Fantasy · RyujiSakamata
true, a logical response. I'll make sure to work on that
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Fantasy · RyujiSakamata
Honest Review: I hope that the writing gets edited so that I could change my review. I encountered problems mostly regarding on the worldbuilding. The lack of descriptions made it out of place for the characters. I'm sad to say that while the characters are talking, I couldn't picture the scene at all. Also, random things are suddenly inserted in the scene, like when I'm set in thinking that the male character stands up but there's suddenly an apple and a chair where he sits. About the characters, same thing as the things, they're suddenly inserted into scenes without introductions. A name suddenly pops up, and I, the reader, wasted time figuring out who he was. On the dialogues, I can tell that it moves the plot. On the other hand, pronouns are scattered, leaving confusion on who is talking. Some dialogues also have missing tags, amplifying the same issue. A famous FL author here in WN once told me that vivid descriptions are what makes a FL story running, which is why you should focus on giving sense of simulation and entertainment for the readers. Other than that, I hope that I can see the re-edits and further dive into the story. Ngl, you did a great job in writing this story, fellow author!
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btw, is it she or her mother who said this?
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ch 11 Screaming with Sirens (3)
Another World Elf's Journey as my Little Sister and a Cosplayer
Realistic · RyujiSakamata